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looooovveeddd it
I thought that story was the best that I have read. I hope that you keep writing about Vane and Alex, and even Darius. Great job loved the characters and the story line, and I hope that you continue writing.
OH FOR A FRIEND LIKE THAT
I'm looking for her. Oh wait I think I found her 27 years ago. It really is a great story.
This is my first story at Literotica
This is my first story submitted here at Literotica. I look forward to your feedback so that I can make improvements if and where they're needed. I like to know that readers enjoy my writing and if they don't, so let me know what bakes your cookies. Thanks...
Very Hot!
Congratulations on your first Literotica story! I love to read about friendships which develop into romance. I'd like to continue getting acquainted with Vane and Alex, perhaps through other installments. Looking forward to your next story.
Romantic
Your writing rouses the romantic in me, keep it up.
Very well written.
It lit my romantic candle. Know of anyone I could share it with??
Well done
Great job for a first! We need to see more.
read for the fifth time
Whenever I'm a bit down,late at night, I look for a bit of romantic writing. I keep coming beck to your stories. My only regret is that you only have two of them posted, so far. Keep going, please; I can only hope you've got a few more like these first two coming.
shmueltzvy@yahoo.com
Wow
What a great story! You expressed such deep emotion throughout this tale. I noticed a couple of spelling errors within but not so bad they distracted. Keep up the good work!
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