All Comments on 'Waking the Dragon Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Blueprint

I liked the style and content of this story but it seemed to me to be more of a blueprint for a full novel or even a trilogy, than a stand-alone short story. There is so much room for expansion of the storyline and many areas to be explored. The opportunities for the inclusion of erotic episodes would be many but including more battle and fight scenes would really take this into the Dragon Fantasy world. I have often thought that the Dragonlance stories would be better for the inclusion of some adult content. A worthwhile project!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 19 years ago
Keep em coming!

This is great! I'm so aroused and interested in all of the characters I can't wait to see where were going!

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