he may have 'died and gone to heaven'
but so did I capital reading
hey maggie long time~
great ... no wait ... paramount story~
this story has it all romance, erotic, sex
and most of all Valentines, excellent tale
Silky is the woman of my dreams! I am just the right age, with just enough experience to be in romantic, erotic heaven with a woman like her
Michael
by
Anonymous01/20/05
such a shame
I truly was going to rate this very highly and then the english and spelling starts to get sloppy. SHe licked under his tentacles? that lost it for me....too bad,,,,had good potential
by
Anonymous01/21/05
Sensuous but a lil sloppy
Mag, it was a wonderful story, but the spelling and grammar and yes, tentacles, made me laugh so hard I lost the mood. Please, please, next time run it by an editor before submitting. Otherwise, a sexy tale. Overall, I enjoyed it.
English
silky smooth~
he may have 'died and gone to heaven'
but so did I capital reading
hey maggie long time~
great ... no wait ... paramount story~
this story has it all romance, erotic, sex
and most of all Valentines, excellent tale
good luck and happy lovers day~ (~_*)
Art~
wonderful
I have a few years to go yet until Im this age, but when I am I hope its something like this! A delightful story, well done and thank you
Woman of my dreams
Silky is the woman of my dreams! I am just the right age, with just enough experience to be in romantic, erotic heaven with a woman like her
Michael
such a shame
I truly was going to rate this very highly and then the english and spelling starts to get sloppy. SHe licked under his tentacles? that lost it for me....too bad,,,,had good potential
Sensuous but a lil sloppy
Mag, it was a wonderful story, but the spelling and grammar and yes, tentacles, made me laugh so hard I lost the mood. Please, please, next time run it by an editor before submitting. Otherwise, a sexy tale. Overall, I enjoyed it.
Silky's Party
The lady throws one hell of a party. This horny 'ol sailor wouldn't mind being the guest.
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