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Yellow Ch. 01

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by Texas Tease01/21/05

Nice

that was great. i could go for a fucking like that.

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by Midwestern_Sex_Fiend01/25/05

Note to readers

The rest of the story is actually posted in Erotic Couplings. I felt that Group Sex wasn't the most fitting category.

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by fakers5101/25/05

good start

the suspense and foresight is going on in my mind of what is going to happen next.

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by voucher77610/02/13

nice character debth

very nice; engaging. you let us know what the characters are thinking, and feeling; i felt swept along by the plot. much richer than a play-by-play.

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