All Comments on 'Broken Dreams'

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
not sure

what all is going on in this poem. That's because it needs to be read slowly and at a quiet moment, which I didn't do or have. Though, I did pick up on the great phrases like fluted glances

ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
?

Is there some reason for all the unusual spelling among all the alliteration?

wrap't nightinggaled chappals cynbals

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Makes me wonder if you're still not dreaming...

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