by rpsuch
rpsuch has consistently brought new life to the old themes that persist in the 'Loving Wives' category. In this story, when the husband decides to teach his cheating wife a lesson, he really teaches her a lesson.
And, yeah, I'll admit it. I'd rather see the Eagles than have sex with my wife, too. It's a Philly thing.
This was a really well written, humorous story! I smiled all the way through. Revenge can take so many forms. Thanks
RP,
This is almost the best thing I have ever read of yours! I love the way he has turned her own rules topsy-turvy and used thought processes (?) right back on her! I think we all have tried this to some degree or another but never with such tremendous results! (Of course, you have the added benefit actually deciding what her reaction will be) A great read! It can be read stand-alone or as a boxed set! You ARE writing a sequel, correct? Huh? We do get the further adventures as he finds out that he doesn't have to be second best, right? Huh? Can you hear the words that are coming out of my mouth??
Oh, hell don't stand there looking at me!!! WRITE THE DAMN THING OR I WILL!!!!
really keeps a person on their toes, I hope there is a part II, if not it is still an excellent story.
I have to say, I think how you've had the husband respond. I was afraid the husband was going to be a wimp in this story as I was reading the first part but this is pretty good.
I really hope you continue with this and you keep the husband strong when it comes to his character and not wimp out. Not cruel or extreme but I don't feel sorry at all for the wife, especially with her current thoughts. Interesting that it was from the point of view of the wife. I'm really hope this ends good for the husband. Keep up the good work.
I have to say, I love how you've had the husband respond. I was afraid the husband was going to be a wimp in this story as I was reading the first part but this is pretty good.
I really hope you continue with this and you keep the husband strong when it comes to his character and not wimp out. Not cruel or extreme but I don't feel sorry at all for the wife, especially with her current thoughts. Interesting that it was from the point of view of the wife. I think that was a great choice. Showing the reader that while upset at her husband she still didn't see why he was doing this to her and she only cared about her needs. Thus making what was happening to her completely deserved.
I'm really hope this ends good for the husband. A sequel would be great, or just another story on the husband as he continues to find out he doesn't have to settle for anyone or be second to anyone. Keep up the good work.
sorry for the double comment.
Turning the tables on the cheating bitch and making her feel like crap is a very smart move. This is a great story I hope you keep going.
Oh, please let there be sequels! Many sequels! This is the most enjoyable revenge story I've yet read in over 4 years reading Lit stories!
I do applaude your imagination and all the wonderful thought you've put into this story, and it really would be a shame to leave it with only the one story!
Best wishes,
Kydreamer
Please continue to show the sick authors how to write to a high standard and our appreciated entertainment. You continue to be a breath of fresh air among a bunch of wannabies about marital life and realistic consequence.
But more than that, you display the ability to manage a storyline without appearing to minipulate it. The emotional reactions portrayed are reasonably close to life's own.
In this story, however, its a bit much for me to believe that he will ever trust her again enough to risk the emotional commitment - the investment that marriage demands for it to function properly. It doesn't seem realistic to believe Humpty Dumpty can be whole again. Not with her admitted infidelities and voiced attitude about his bedroom inadequecies.
In other words, he must be getting even - teaching her about life without any intent of staying in her self serving distorted version of a marital relationship.
More creative well crafted stellar stories please - thanks for the time and talent expended here - Regards
I loved every moment of it! And I even liked your ending. I'm sure even so that Kanga was horribly frustrated to not see a summation of where it ended. To me, the ending is self-evident. If Superman wasn't deeply in love with her he wouldn't be going to this trouble to make her see what she was really doing. A week or so would certainly not be enough to drive the point home.
Even so I'll give you the lament I hear so often. When are you giving us the outcome of this one-sided battle?
Doug
another hit! this story doesn't really need a follow up but sure would be nice.
one thing for sure, when you hear your fans clamoring for an encore you know you got a winner!
great job. thanks,
don
I really enjoyed this well written story. You are to be congratulated!!
You can't drop this story, please, please carry it further, but also please keep him in the Superman mode.
The story is great. I don't really think it's practical, though, just from what she told him to start with. The main
reason I think this - his dicks too small.
Is there some sort of bug going around the author circles that prevents the culmination of the stories--a real ending?
You will give us the final chapter, right?
Great! A real story with real people in it. You return to the theme of "Too Far" which is the dangers posed to a relationship by one of the parties being too "soft" on the other, to the extent that the partner being indulged believes that anything is ultimately foregivable. In reality, there is always a line, and the beauty of this tale is that the wife really, at first, has no idea that she has crossed it. Her stuttering progress towards the realisation that she, in fact, might just have done so is excellently done. So much so that you almost have me feeling sorry for her!
In "Too Far", the lengths to which the wife went to manipulate the pliable husband into allowing her to commit "blameless adultery" was too much for the marriage to survive. Here, I agree with what I think the Troubadour is suggesting - if the same was to be the outcome in this case, the wife would already be out the door. The husband seems to be intent on retaining the marriage, but on his terms. I assume that there will be a second chapter, as the job appears to be only half done at this point. Irrespective, thanks to you, and the relatively few other real authors, for sustaining my faith in this site as being one worth visiting on a regular basis.
I can't remember enjoying a story more. It is realistic and spot on. Please do another.
I LOVED how he turned the tables on her! This is definitely on my top ten story list.
Do write a second chapter, she might have started to see the light at the end of the story, but she clearly has a LONG way to go! I hope we get to see every step of the way.
What a great story. Talk about a delightful turning of the tables. And as for her, if I hadn't already used the title, you simply could have named her "Without a Clue". A delicious read indeed. Loved it. Patti.
I will have this one in my top ten for years. Wow! I am used
to your outstanding thought processes, but even for you...this
is a notch up. I don't know how you can top it, but it seems
to be open for another chapter/follow up.
Frankly, I cannot imagine why he would want her. Her mental
processes seem to consist of me, me and of course...me. Hey,
you are dating my ex are you?
I have to admit I usually dont like your stories but this one was great.
You took a great look at a common fantasy on here and poked some very funny yet serious fun at it.
Great piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jackie
very nice story. I like the way hubby is handling this he's no wimp and he loves his wife. I looks like she is getting just what she ask for and now dosn't like it at all. PLEASE give us the rest of the story
very nice story. I like the way hubby is handling this he's no wimp and he loves his wife. I looks like she is getting just what she ask for and now dosn't like it at all. PLEASE give us the rest of the story
Damn this was fantastic. Letting her have a taste of her own medicine!!!!!! She doesn't have a right to say anything to her husband, because she doesn't own his body and he will do whatever it takes to become happy and she has to be grateful for this (according to some logic I don't agree with).
Man, this story is fucking awesome!!!!!!!!
This is a great story. A new angle to the cheating wife scenario. It needs a sequel,
and I beg you for a sequel,,, there is so much more that can happen here. I can't wait.
Personally, I vote against a sequel. Any more would just be repetitive. One of the problems I've long had with American literature -- yes, even the stories posted here -- is the need to spell everything out.
That said, I do agree that this is probably your best work. The plot was well though out, such as building from where she said that she was sorry not because of what she did but because he found out to "I could cut down on the outside men" to "If I had to give up the other guys altogether, that was what I would do."
Beautiful - Just fucking beautiful! One of the best I've ever read. Please please please take it just a little farther.
Very well written and enjoyable. One has to wonder how dumb the wife is to really think her husband "loves" her that much to accept her actions, obviously she didn't "love" him that much.
I realy enjoyed this story. The way you set it up, the characters. The story demontrating an alternative approach to handleling a thoughtless betrayer. Great job. Always thought these stories of infedelity always made the victim so shallow and helpless and accepting. I think a sexy story can still be writen with out acceptance of humiliation by the victim. Nice to see some that doesn't fall into some kind of formula script.
Where's the rest ?!?!!??! Must find out what happens,and hurry it up!!!!!!!!!!!!
While I don't agree with his attack on swinging, I like that he is making her see that it goes both ways. Also, she was cheating on him, and clearly thinking of herself more than him. Serves her right. She actually had the nerve to expect him to be monogamous when she wasn't! Holy double standard, Batman!
I loved this story.It's great that she's getting a taste of her own medicine. Will there be a second part? Would love to see how this story turns out.
As the others have said this story is excellent. It is so satisfying to see a smug selfish bitch hoist on her own poitard.
She thought he was such a pussy and would put up with her crap but he did what no one else has done and turned her words back on herself by doing exactly as she told him she would do, using all her arguements to justify it against her as well.
Please, finish this story. I hope he leaves the bitch and gets together with Linda or Tina or Debbie, anyone but her!
It's about time the husband turns the table on her! I could understand if before you get married that you agree to an open marriage, or even if you talk about the problem, but to just go and get screwed without even the courtesy of talking it out with your spouse.... I'd get proof, divorce the bitch and sued her and her boyfriends for alienation of affection or something like that. At the very least , it'll be some payback!!!
This is the first story where I've enjoyed being in the mind of a selfish person. You encapsulated a point of view so well it was frightening. A great read.
Great story. Finally a husband has a solution for a straying wife. Poor slut doesn't know whether she is coming or going. Smart of Barry to turn the tables on her. I would love to read a followup story.
Only a few authors of erotica truly explores the emotions of their characters. Your stories are truly refreshing, I can only name a few others that excites the readers arousal and yet be moved by different emotions altogether. I hope you will fininsh this story although it seems the relationship will not hold any longer.
I could see at least 3 satisfying endings and I thought readers would enjoy it best if they picked their own and imagined that's how it turned out. It was the many ways it could turn out that convince me to end it the way I did. But, since the response was around 4-1 (including the emails) I plan to do an ending. Feel free to supply your own.
THIS IS WHAT MEN ARE ABOUT AND NOT SOME WHIPPING BOY.EVERY WRITER WANT A STRONG WOMEN AND WEAK MEN PLOT IS THEME FOR LITEROTICA.COM.,BUT LIFE SAIDS DIFFERENT.I MAN WANT STAND IN FRONT OF HIS WIFE WHILE ANOTHER FUCK HER HOLDING HIS DICK GETTING OFF.IF PEOPLE READ THAT SHIT SOMEBODY IS GOING TO GET KILL.INSTEAD OF HOLDING THEIR DICKS,THEY WILL BE HOLDING A GUN.
I am so tired of the obliging cuckhold stories that I had to give you two thumbs up!! Well written and no schmaltzy ending.
This no Lois Lane you are dealing with. I want to see how long will she go before she crack or give up. Will she foresake her marriage and revert back to her old ways? Will the husband finally fuck one of those women? Will they split? Please give us a closure of such a magnificent piece of work, showing a strong man who refused to be cum drinking, cuckold wimp. Thank You.
This no Lois Lane you are dealing with. I want to see how long will she go before she crack or give up. Will she foresake her marriage and revert back to her old ways? Will the husband finally fuck one of those women? Will they split? Please give us a closure of such a magnificent piece of work, showing a strong man who refused to be cum drinking, cuckold wimp. Thank You.
I WAS MESMERIZED! I loved the way he turned her rules back on her! This guy is perfect! Thanks for a real man in this story!
perfect is all i can say... i cant imagine a better arguement to put on someone who might betray u and reason it
A brilliant approach to a sometimes boring subject. A really fun read!
Such a twist on the way these stories are usually told.
Barry takes her "it's only sex" arguments and turns them on her. Suddenly, life for Grace is not so much fun - it suddenly hits her that she might just lose everything.
And Barry's just using the same arguments/rules Grace flung at him.
I can see why there were calls for a new installment - does she REALLY learn her lesson and does she REALLY change --- and does it still matter to Barry?
I had a smile on my face through the rest of the story after it became apparent what he was doing. Thank you.
This was clever and compelling. I think it has a great truth in it: we often want, and expect, to be able to seek our own pleasure (sexual or otherwise) but would be devastated if our partners did the same. We want the best of both worlds in relationships.
Now, I would have truly given her a taste of her own medicine, but that's a small quibble. This was a 5, and one of the better stories I've ever read online.
I had more fun reading this than all of the erotic stories on this site put together. Thank you for a very enjoyable morning :)
The wife was shure dumb to screw with him she had everything and now where is she
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Made me belly laugh. Sure the characters are fantastic but the satire was delicious. Thanks, rpsuch, for a humorous read.
Enjoyed this satire although the reverse psychology thing is a little doubtful. It only works if wifey really loves her hubby and wants to stay married. In real life, staying together would be unlikely if a partner had so many affairs. I think Nici might find this story interesting; one could imagine how a husband like Superman in this story would throw a lot of cold water on the spouse who confronts him with "Something We Have to Talk About." I'll be interested in the next part.
she had her own argument turned against her and found out it was not very pleasant. he got out to find he was not stuck w her or her demands/options. if nothing else, husband is happier, so much for wife's.
i stumbled back onto this story, and just enjoyed it again. fun to read and know the angst of her. personally, i think he should remove her from his life, where she truly is just silly in her thinking, to late for her though.
humorous. I loved the interaction and lessons he thought her.Well written and executed. Thanks for the entertainment.
The best, most original and smart, rich with dark and dry humor story I can remeber reading here in a very very long time! Bravo!<P>
By the way -at the end it did feel more like the story was interrupted than really ended, but I think I got the jist...It could go on in several direction -bur nothing would EVER be the same... <P>
BTW -it could easily be a basis for a short play!
with yours, he settles for seconds, where for 3 years she indulged herself without a second thought. now he finds his bearings and can truly have a rounded experience, and she can screw anyone she has a mind to do. that tinge of selfishness just won't go away, and with her comfort, more of the past. a restlessness that won't go away, and she can have whatever she wants. that deduction, your ending. THE END
A ROCK BAND?
Well written and one of the best as far as it goes.
It was left open ended but I don't see them making it it the long haul. The are places she can get help for the sexual side of it (sexaholics anonymous, therapsts, etc.) but she has no idea how to be unselfish. She can't possibly learn without some slips along the way and their marriage is so fragile that a couple of slips would be fatal.
than the few others I've read thus far of yours (I'm only on letter C, though I did browse briefly further down the alphabet). You are a superb casuist -- a delight to see logical argument so aptly displayed. And of course a self-amusing ironist, the best sort!
At first I was taken aback, then I just had to laugh. Now I am searching the web to find out more about 'casuist' as mentioned by VickiTern. Gee, it's amazing what I have been able to learn from your stories & in this case one of the commentors! Keep writing please, I am enjoying my education.
that they will return to a monogamous relationship---because he seems to be in love with his wife----why else would he bother to teach her the lessons he is teaching her.....but...isn't she just a little bit dim? Wait....very dim? Great story, though, if a great story is one that keeps the reader smiling all the way.
I found you by reading an alternate ending to one of HDK's stories - I liked it a lot and stayed - glad I did - this is incredibly satisfying
All the little things that we live with in order to live together can be really painful when we radicalize! I get the impression that she does not want to trade him in for a larger model....
Entertaining isn't the word. Absolutely great. This is a well thought out story and a real laugh. Just loved the way he kept turning things around on her.
Excellent and Favorited.
Since I am Constitutionally unable to just enjoy a story without throwing in a critique or suggestion, I missed the part where she, in a fit of rage, decided to bring in another toy to rub her actions in her husband's face in it again.
While she might have been smart enough to reconsider that action, I'm sure it passed her mind.
This was fun enough to read again immediately.
I loved this story, basically for its originality and satiric humor. What better way to point out injustice than forcing the perpetrator to endure that which they have dealt out?
Five well deserved stars! This one was a gem.
why is he even considering a rebound try. TK U MLJ LV NV
If what she's doing really disgusts him that much, why the hell is he doing it too? It doesn't make any sense to behave like a dirty whore when the thought of said whore supposedly disgusts you. It just comes off as hypocrisy. Okay, so he likes an open marriage, fuck around, divorce the dumb bitch and move on with life?
Clark Kent is still bullet-proof in his reporter suit and glasses!
This is a remarkable 'sauce for goose' morality tale! Hubby's balls are WAY too big to fit in Superman's tights!
Excellent Tale. The whore, and that's what she is for screwing twelve other guys, didn't believe in her double standard. She could screw around but he couldn't. I call this a turnabout of fair play, or something like that. It seems he tolerated a whole lot of unfulfilled behavior from her and he expressed it. Fabulously. Fucking two face cunt.
OH YEAH
"No affair. No love. Not yet. I mean I guess there's always the chance of that when you're seeing other people, isn't there? But I need it to be fulfilled, just like you do."
..some turn-around on her attitude here. Right so. Would really love this one to go on to a regular ending.
Thankis for writing it.
Can't be rated. The characters are so unrealistic that you want to scream. The husbands actions and the turning back on the wife of everything she said to justify her actions is brilliant. I recognize that the characters have to behave in a certain way for the story to work but they are so annoying in many ways that listening to them is like fingernails on a blackboard (aside do they even have them anymore?) Kudos on the basic story but I can't rate it.
This should have been listed as chapter 1 to hold the FTDS! folks at bay. I have recently read another story in which the wife had the same attitude as this wife's early attitude. Do some women (and men) really believe this or are they merely rationalizing? I'll make an additional comment here so I don't have to at the end of chapter 2. If he takes her back it must be because he loves her beyond my understanding OR because divorce would leave him destitute. But - no kids and she works some so I would expect divorce would not be that awful for him.
"You don't give me loyalty, which was what I thought I wanted more than the sex. "
Puh-leaze if she started shorting him on sex or stopped sex all together he'd very quickly would have been the disloyal one.
Cheating, that should be acceptable in a marriage, but sarcasm?
Completely unacceptable!*
*(for the sarcasm detection challenged that of course was sarcasm)
You ended there? It was a decent story until it stopped. Notice I didn't say "ended," because it didn't. God how I hate wasting my time reading stories written by morons who can't write an ending. 1 star!
What an absolutely civilised way to express his disgust at her actions and attitude.
It made her think and realise what her actions had caused.
I would like to read more and see how he organised the divorce and settlement.
cheating 3 years in 5 of marriage. why would he even think about keeping her? damn wimp.
She cheated with a dozen men or more over the past 3+ years out of a 5 year marriage - and he's still gonna try and fix it??? Unbelievable. How can he still love the evil bitch after all she's done to him? No shame, no remorse, no common sense. She was intending to continue with her affairs whether he liked it or not. Said she started because she had extra NEEDS, but now does it because his dick is too small and she really enjoys sleeping with other men. This marriage died long ago - only her disrespect remains.
Great story, very well written.
....on my second time reading it. What a hoot! I laughed just as hard as I do with HDK's stuff. Great job, thanks.
If it's good enough for the goose.... ;-)
“He was often sarcastic. I didn't know if I would be able to put up with that through a long marriage.” – Don’t think that’s going to be much of a problem!
"Maybe there are some situations where everybody can't be happy." – That being the case, then the happiness that requires cheating should be the one denied.
“I decided not to plan any extra activities for a while to give him the time he needed.” – I guess those “needs” aren’t so needful after all!
“What were the magic words to make him realize what an idiotic idea this was?” – Just about as idiotic as hers, but she’s too self-centered to see that!
“Something seemed wrong about this” – Well, duh! You just now figuring that out?
“I thought he would come to see my side of it” – Yep, just like you’re coming to see HIS side of things!
the other stays in the clouds. TK U MLJ LV NV
And I never stopped. What a btb? Oh my gosh, that is just pure genius.