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by Anonymous

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by bdsmbill01/22/05

Very hot story

This one is excellent, and a new twist on mind control. Keep up the good work.

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by BlackShanglan01/23/05

Clever, enticing, and hotly paced

This is a beautifully handled work. Op-Cit's dedication to cutting down to the raw and vital elements really shows in a story that is perfectly paced, tightly knit, and highly effective. The dialogue here is of particular note - very nicely handled through several different characters, moods, and motivations. The basic premise is exciting and delightful, and the ending very nicely handled. I'm so glad I took the time to look in on it.

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by Anonymous08/07/07

Best Intentions Review

Very Outstanding so whats next? Will it continue?

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