Enjoyed all 4 chapters. Looking forward to the next one.
a 5 vote hinges of a glib phrase, "in and of itself". It is not only facile, but meaningless. Poor choice, and it should have been edited out.
yes, wishing you were single
Gold: A great story - marred only by the odd typo ('her' - when you meant 'he'). Maybe it's personal but - I find that typos interrupt the flow of the story.
I've never had a boss like that. Damn! Why haven't I ever had a boss like that??????!!!!
Well written, could've have been more rougher but that's a personal taste of mine, still enjoyed it.
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Keep up the good work. Enjoyed all 4 chpters.
Enjoyed all 4 chapters. Looking forward to the next one.
it's unfortunate when
a 5 vote hinges of a glib phrase, "in and of itself". It is not only facile, but meaningless. Poor choice, and it should have been edited out.
wishing
yes, wishing you were single
Gold: a great story
Gold:
A great story - marred only by the odd typo ('her' - when you meant 'he'). Maybe it's personal but - I find that typos interrupt the flow of the story.
Something to dream about now
I've never had a boss like that. Damn! Why haven't I ever had a boss like that??????!!!!
Enjoyed it.
Well written, could've have been more rougher but that's a personal taste of mine, still enjoyed it.
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