All Comments on 'I Will Come For You'

what a sweet love story.

Speaking as a horny, hetero, single father of 2 teenage girls, may i THANK you for a story with a loving, understanding father that isn't dying to get into younger girls' pants.

Here I sit:

Male...Conservative...Heterosexual...(Oh! Did I forget to mention I'm 73 years old?)... And I'm also drying tears from my eyes which were brought about by the beauty and the intensity of the emotions I found in this marvelous

'LOVE STORY!.

I'm alone now, and I love to read beautiful love stories like your's. They bring back many fond memories.

I hope they are together forever.

By the way, you need to edit this piece, and add just one page. About how on their way out of town, Cody saw that same asshole going into that same little dinner. She suddenly pulled the big bike to the curb, pushed the kick stand down and climbed off, leaving the engine running. She turned to Erin and said I'll be right back...this won't take long. She went inside, and saw him sitting at the counter on a stool. She walked up to him, tapped and him on the shoulder. As he turned around, she jerked him off of the stool and kicked the shit out of him, then turned around and walked calmly back out to the bike and climbed back on. As she kicked the transmission into first gear, Erin shouted, what was that for? Cody turned to her and said "nothing, I just feel better now"

And they rode off into the sunshine.

P.S. I'm sorry for taking the liberty of adding to your brilliant story. It was just a little fun thought I had.

Love and kisses: Chuck.

P.P.S COME ON, I COULD LOVE SOMEONE WHO IS GAY CAN'T I?

As a lifetime romantic, I enjoyed the theme of "I'll return for you someday."

I loved this story! The romance and love embodied in the characters is truly a marvel. Very seldom do I see the great character developement that you show here.

I would also like to add that I would also like to have seen Cody kick the living shit out of that asshole at the diner. I would hope you would consider a part 2 and tell us about their lives in their new home together. They have 10 years to catch up on and the stories and fantasies that could be told could truly be fun.

P.S. I'm a hetro male 35 years of age who believes that love is a matter of heart not gender. "The Heart want's who the Heart want's and the head be damned!" That is a saying I've used since I was old enough to realise what love was. I begrudge and judge noone the right to love who they will.

im mel. i think u did a great job starting off with the childhood flashback.

I love all your stories! They are one of the greatest i've come across so far in this site. keep writing more ya? Oh i do notice, you like to use a lot of green and blue eyes and the butches are all very all. :)

Aww~ I like the story about when they were kids. They were just so innocent and cute! But of course, when they reunited, it's even more touching (no pun intended)!

Wonderful piece again!

when they got seperated i almost cried! but it was a great story, spot on.

You have an amazing gift that you've shared with us through these stories. They deserve the utmost praise, and I don't know what that is but whatever it is, you deserve! ... Right well great story please don't stop writing! Thank you for the heart warming stories.

its simpely amazingly!!

i fucking love this story it totally rock!!

its so beautifull!! got my eyes watery filled with tears so beautifull. filled with love!!!

it was very well writen, the characters are very well built and the end :a fulfilled promise !! so beautifull

keep the good writing!!!

i have just found your stories and am working through them, you write with such love and passion, thankyou so much for sharing your gift

I believe this is by faaar the best story in Literotica. It's a very touchy story, a great piece of art.

A truly Masterpiece.

Keep on writing more parts of this beutiful story!! =D

You're an amazing writer.

I cried more than once reading this story.

I want a relationship like that sooo bad.

This story should be made into a movie.

The lesbian brokeback mountain!

U never disappoint, I loved it immensely, I could identify with this beautiful story, please write more we're in 2008, take us readers on yet another sensual journey ,If u were 2 publish yr work I will purchase all yr books, If you were 2 have a book fair I would be d 1st in line.......I BEG U, WRITE MORE!!!

THIS IS BY FAR THE STORY I LOVE MOST IN LITEROTICA BY FAR!!!!

THE FIRST PART IS AMAZING, WHEN THE GIRL PROMISES THE OTHER TO MARRY HER WHEN THEY WERE OLDER!!

JUST PERFECT!!!!

AND THE SECOND PART, JUST VEEERY TERRIFIC!!!!!

WE WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE!!

BYE!!

your stories are totally wicked man!! i've read all of them, and i have to agree with everyone else...you should write more.

It was excelent. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Got a bit weepy. What am I saying! I am a man...

Stefanus

This is soo sweet! I just wanted to cry for those two! I was so happy when they found each other.

Your stories are beautiful. Just no words. Wow wow wow. Don't stop writing

Damn - I'm a sucker for a happy ending! Fab story, absolutely lovely!

xx

AAAARRRGH!!! >.< XD XD XD This was such a beautiful childhood-friend story that blossomed into perfection. =3 Fantastic writing. ^^

This story put a big smile on my face. Definitely 5 stars, 6 if I could give it...

I cried, damn near weeped.

Following the title "yeah man"

Wow ! Now that's a love story :) That deserves more than 5 stars. Keep up the good work.

it was such a nice story or i'd rather say awesome!!!!

i was touched by their loved to one another

thanks to the author of this story for making such a wonderful piece :)

You are one of my favorites here in Literotica. I love each and every story. This one is as beautiful as others. 5 stars for sure.

-C.K.

I've read this and Hidden Beauty and I just LOVE them. You are an amazing writer. What I like most is that both were just happy (for the most part) and there was no heart-shattering conflict. They were stories I could just smile through and feel how much the characters loved and cared about eachother. Keep on writing ^_^

I literally love all of your stories and this one is definitely no exception. 😁💓💕💜

This is hands down one of the best stories I've ever read. It had the right balance of emotion, storytelling and erotica. I especially loved the childhood friend aspect of the the whole story.

All in all, it was fantastic. I gave you a full 5/5 stars, but I'd go higher if I could.

I love all your stories I wish you would write some more :)

could it be more pedestrian ? wait: add: the birds were chirping and the smiley sun was smiling...

This is my second time reading this. Going from innocent childhood to love as adults is beautiful.

very well written

I just recently stumbled upon your collection of stories, and I am really enjoying them. This was a particularly good story, and I liked how you worked the supernatural into it. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Excellent story enjoyed it lots ....

Lovely. Just so sweet and loving. I thought the beginning was a little stilted but once Cody and Erin got together it went up to another plane. Loved the little twist about Mr Thompson.

Shame you've stopped writing herd but hope you're keeping it going.

Unfortunately its so much of real life in it, but a wonderful story and with your talent writing such storys, i great find

Always loved this tale.

So simple yet heartwarming and very plausible.