by titsRus35
Derrick did what most brothers want to. With Jenny knowing he was watching and her latent approval, story could go on forever.
Nice to read a story without the usual spelling and/or grammar mistakes. Definitely needs another chapter or three. He deserves more than just watching. How about if Jenny catches him and decides to give him more than a show ?
Does the sister have any busty girl-friends who might drop by ? Stories with above-average 'boobage' are rare, so please indulge us with more.
Of course I want more, more, more! But some problems: 1. Spelling and grammar, 2. A fundamental misunderstanding of bra size. The number. Is the band size so if it’s super big it just means the woman has a very wide rib cage/is really fat. The cup size is basically the difference between the boob size and the band, so the bigness here is what counts, but DDD=F DD=E, GG=H, etc. getting this wrong is a real turn off. Still want more though! Let’s get the whole family involved!
By shaved pussy. Especially being Italian, should be nice and dark.
It was kind of an ok start, but needs lots more. Tons of potential with the mom, aunts, maybe even cousins, and there's lots more to do with the sister. It barely scratched the surface of how good of a story this could become. Just try to make it longer or post the short chapters very frequently to keep it moving.
How do you fuck that up?
"I have always loved big tots."
All I can think of now are tater tots.
How can I flick my bean to tater tots?
Appreciate the feedback. Definitely more to come. Also uh, sorry about the tots thing. No idea how I missed that. Was editing on my phone and it must have autocorrected. Edited version coming soon.
if you write your chapters longer then a lit one page then your numbers will go up. Most readers like to be able to get into the story before the chapter ends.
More time to build a story.
Can't wait for the next chapter
First line of the story has a glaring spelling error. Didn't go any farther.