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Yellow Ch. 03

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by Anonymous06/10/07

Did I miss something?

Okay where is the sex in this one?

I read all of three chapters. This writer has potential; the sex was hot - although far too brief. Why all the fast cumming? Ever hear of enjoying the journey? I assure you most women don't cum this fast. Men with sense make it last, especially if they want repeat business.

Anyway I kept on reading hoping that like in real life the guy has some self control on the third time... and just like in real life sometimes, there is no third time. I suggest some longer interludes and ALWAYS have a sex encounter in every chapter, there was another couple if you want to keep it real!

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by Anonymous01/04/08

Hmmmm....

Waited for the erotic bit... thought maybe it would end up in a foursome .... but was really disappointed...

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by Anonymous01/26/10

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wooow i LOVED this story, i was more intrigued by the whole instead of the erocticness of it but thats what made the story, i hope thers more comeing.

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