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NOT A BAD STORY
I'm rating your story at 100% because I think it is a fairly good submission. I didn't get a hard-on reading it but it was funny and an easy read. But I don't get that many woodies at my age.
Clipped tip
I really enjoyed this story.The end was clipped, but that made the story, didn't it?
Different
I liked it a lot.
AND, it doesn't need any more chapters...
Clever, unusual and
interesting. Would have liked it to be fleshed out just a tiny bit more, but not all that much. Worth the time for almost any Lit reader.
Light Side
It's nice to read a funny story once in a while.
Delightful
I hope the commenter was asking for the story to be a little more fleshed out.
ABSOLUTE BULL!
Incredibly boring, no excitement really, rambling on and self-pitying..Wondered how I got to the end, when it bored me silly.Useless.
Good, but could be better....
A member of a cross-cultural marriage for the past 41 years, there is a lot of truth in this story that I have experienced in an American-Korean marriage. American men seem to think that oriental wives are just a little short of complete servants. They don't seem to understand that extreme jealousy when a man is socializing with another woman, even in front of their wife, seems almost akin to approval to murder of a spouse. I would never suggest or approve to another to enter into a cross-cultural marriage, and most certainly would not do it myself, again. It is very American "un-manly" and creates a lot of emotional instability.
Good, but could be better....
A member of a cross-cultural marriage for the past 41 years, there is a lot of truth in this story that I have experienced in an American-Korean marriage. American men seem to think that oriental wives are just a little short of complete servants. They don't seem to understand that extreme jealousy when a man is socializing with another woman, even in front of their wife, seems almost akin to approval to murder of a spouse. I would never suggest or approve to another to enter into a cross-cultural marriage, and most certainly would not do it myself, again. It is very American "un-manly" and creates a lot of emotional instability.
Actually quite funny!
My spouse (36 years) is from Peru and my daughter-in-law (5 years) is from Brazil.
The point isn't the specifics, but the funny and sometimes NOT funny things that happen in cross cultural relationships. When my future spouse first saw a police car in the US she said "Look! the fooz (fuzz). It was five years before I had the heart to tell her. (Besides I always got a chuckle out of it.)
Cute, but....
This was a cute story. The errors in punctuation and other typos were a bit distracting, however. A nice effort.
Wow
Almost eight years since the last comment. How did I find this you say? Quite by accident is my answer. And I'm very glad 'cause this was very funny. Read it.
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