That was really hot i loved it. But what happens now with paul and mandy, will bud come clean? will he still fuck mandy? so many questions, can't wait till the next chapter.
_keep fighting_
very good story, I like it alot can't wait to see what happens next with Paul, Mandy,Bud and Shirl. Your story line has always been great and it looks like your writting skills may be comming around too.
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Hot Segment Well Done
Damn, this was hot!!! Me again. Constructively, see title and prior sentence. Nice work and theme!!! See seperate email to you. Thanks and Regards
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That was really hot i loved it. But what happens now with paul and mandy, will bud come clean? will he still fuck mandy? so many questions, can't wait till the next chapter.
_keep fighting_
great
very good story, I like it alot can't wait to see what happens next with Paul, Mandy,Bud and Shirl. Your story line has always been great and it looks like your writting skills may be comming around too.
Hot Segment Well Done
Damn, this was hot!!! Me again. Constructively, see title and prior sentence. Nice work and theme!!! See seperate email to you. Thanks and Regards
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