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The Crimson King Ch. 12

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by Anonymous08/09/08

I LOVED it!

You wrote the greatest vamp story I have yet to read in a long time, and that's saying something...it had bits of stories for all sorts of types. It was wonderfully and well thought out and u get an "A" for it, dude. Way to go!

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by Anonymous07/07/09

Your story was great it had a great plot and i enjoyed reading it keep up tha brilliant work

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by cuteButSexy21801/27/10

Good Job!

I really love this series... Thorne and Sammi are wonderful characters, not to mention their love scenes are BEYOND HOT!!! Lol! I can't wait for more wonderful stories to be posted. You are very talented, it's a joy to read your stories.. Please make more soon! :)

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by MabelCinnamon02/03/10

I read the whole thing through

I loved that Jacob was the Crimson King... Really good stuff!!!

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by Anonymous05/10/11

EXCELLENT!!!

I read the entire series before I commented but I gave all chapters 5's!!! You had me crying on this last chapter though.....You're an excellent writer.

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I was lucky to stumble across this gem, and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Excellent! You had me in tears with this last chapter, I absolutely adored it! I can't wait to go and read some more from you!

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