by jhgwe
The writing was very good, but I really liked that you were able to use the ST universe and bring something new. I don't think I could personally get into this fetish, but you handled it well.
Kudos
I am not a sci-fi guy but do have a real piss fetish. I’ve tried scat but too worried about disease. You blended it all into a great story. Well done
While I'm no fan of water sports (ask my 3rd girlfriend) and I'm trying to shun my most extreme scat natures, this seems to have hit some poignant chords with me pertaining my current dating situation (which i must end). Your writing style and prose are stellar. Your work is greatly appreciated.
Please continue the story. We are all anxiously awaiting chapter 2
Expression of true love. Scat makes it as sensual as possible. I even do not insist on writing the sequel - the story looks totally completed.