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by seranade

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Aunty MuseAunty Museover 19 years ago
Edit

You would benefit greatly if you had a friendly editor.

i deducks 4 badly speiling grammer & sin tacks,

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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It does need some editing but nothing too major.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
grammar police~

hehehe hey bro, yep that's the grammar police

you've been arrested and police brutality <grin>

just delete it as I did ...

nice poem bro~

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