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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/24/05

lovin' K

Very nice. A bit of lovin', beforehand, might have made it even better....
Lukas

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by sexmate01/24/05

Good Start!

Story could have used more build up, and more foreplay and teasing when the act finally happened!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate

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by Anonymous09/10/05

Not Bad

Could use more foreplay, and time. It moved too quickly in my opinion

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by Anonymous10/05/07

Good sex

Too many stories are unbalanced with oral sex. This was a believeable story with just the right amount for the first time. I thought they jumped into bed too quickly. They could have shared the shower for instance A little more buildup could have given the story a little added punch. No pun intended! All in all a good job. No pun intended

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