I like a settled story somtimes, but I would have had Glen tell Sarah about the letter etc.
As far as commitment and love go, nobody can tell in advance.
This was an ending, your choice at least.
LIfe is not perfect. Your story, however, was just right. I really enjoyed it.
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Anonymous03/21/06
It's beautiful
Quite frankly, this story is more mature and thoughtful than others on Literotica, which I enoyed. It had enough unexpected twists and bumps to keep it always very interesting, too. Altogether it was a great "read" for this divorced middle-aged male, who now won't give up on finding real love.
I would have liked to see some revenge against his slut ex-wife, Rosemary. I guess the change in social status and the lower financial scale possibly was punishment enough. No more pampered rich woman with different men coming in several times a week. And she was such a snot to Glen.
I nominate Trish as the person who sent the first note, if you mentioned that in the story
I missed it. Thank you for writing.
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Anonymous10/19/13
BRILLIANT TALE OF LOVE OVER ADVERSITY
Loved it...very gentle and very romantic....pity about the fallen star...but you could see that coming.....I reckon it was Trish who sent the letter out of her love and respect for him, but we will never know....rolled along at a nice pace.....and the ending was just great......well done.....
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Anonymous11/06/13
A beautiful story of love over sadness
I loved this one and the way it unfolded....such tenderness and loving between them both......I think it was Trish who sent the note to him as she obviously knew what was going on with the slut whore skank having a rotation of lovers - he found out the hard way....sometimes we are so blind as to what is under our noses....glad she ended up in the sticks and poor...just what she deserved and so glad he married Sarah...a strong woman to take care of him and then the loving relationship with Trish and her husband and baby.....a brilliant, brilliant story so full of compassion.....well done....
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Anonymous09/30/14
I'm so glad he told that cow where to get off and she was dumped by that thieving bank manager. Such I brilliant story so glad they got married brilliant brilliant
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Anonymous10/03/15
since you mentioned bible verses to prove a point...
why didn't you mention what the bible says about FUCKING before marriage? Why did you change the name of Glen in the end and WHAT THE FUCK IS SWANNING???
Why didn't he contact a solicitor as soon as he got back from Rascal's Point? Most jurisdictions provide for abandonment. Rosemary left for parts unknown. There was no known way to contact her. File the papers for divorce with the court, publish the public announcement, move on.
I worry for those two immature people. I hope Glen (whatever his last name is) has a good practice manager.
Thank You!
I like a settled story somtimes, but I would have had Glen tell Sarah about the letter etc.
As far as commitment and love go, nobody can tell in advance.
This was an ending, your choice at least.
Thanks and bye
John
Very nice ending.
LIfe is not perfect. Your story, however, was just right. I really enjoyed it.
It's beautiful
Quite frankly, this story is more mature and thoughtful than others on Literotica, which I enoyed. It had enough unexpected twists and bumps to keep it always very interesting, too. Altogether it was a great "read" for this divorced middle-aged male, who now won't give up on finding real love.
A lovely little love story.
I would have liked to see some revenge against his slut ex-wife, Rosemary. I guess the change in social status and the lower financial scale possibly was punishment enough. No more pampered rich woman with different men coming in several times a week. And she was such a snot to Glen.
I nominate Trish as the person who sent the first note, if you mentioned that in the story
I missed it. Thank you for writing.
BRILLIANT TALE OF LOVE OVER ADVERSITY
Loved it...very gentle and very romantic....pity about the fallen star...but you could see that coming.....I reckon it was Trish who sent the letter out of her love and respect for him, but we will never know....rolled along at a nice pace.....and the ending was just great......well done.....
A beautiful story of love over sadness
I loved this one and the way it unfolded....such tenderness and loving between them both......I think it was Trish who sent the note to him as she obviously knew what was going on with the slut whore skank having a rotation of lovers - he found out the hard way....sometimes we are so blind as to what is under our noses....glad she ended up in the sticks and poor...just what she deserved and so glad he married Sarah...a strong woman to take care of him and then the loving relationship with Trish and her husband and baby.....a brilliant, brilliant story so full of compassion.....well done....
I'm so glad he told that cow where to get off and she was dumped by that thieving bank manager. Such I brilliant story so glad they got married brilliant brilliant
since you mentioned bible verses to prove a point...
why didn't you mention what the bible says about FUCKING before marriage? Why did you change the name of Glen in the end and WHAT THE FUCK IS SWANNING???
So many questions
Why didn't he contact a solicitor as soon as he got back from Rascal's Point? Most jurisdictions provide for abandonment. Rosemary left for parts unknown. There was no known way to contact her. File the papers for divorce with the court, publish the public announcement, move on.
I worry for those two immature people. I hope Glen (whatever his last name is) has a good practice manager.
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