All Comments on 'Jack's Life Darkens'

Please continue his story. I'm in Love 😊

One of the best pieces of writing on the site for ages. Thank you.

This is a very tough subject and you handled it amazingly well. It's so much more erotic when thought processes are involved.

I'm not a fan of non-consensual scenarios so this was a great way to get the fantasy going.

Extra kudos for not having an unfeasible number of orgasms...

Worth 5* even though it would have benefited from more padding.

Loved it!

I wouldn't change anything.

It was intense. It felt raw and real.

I've enjoyed seing it from the Dom's perspective.

Can't wait to read more of you. Hope you continue with this story line.

Josie

IT'S NOT TRUE that "a man should never hit a woman under any circumstances"!HE COULD HIT HER VERY WELL if it's necessary,for example is she becomes violent and attacks him or to calm her if she becomes hysterical!

Also,regarding hooker abusers,THEY ALSO GO TO JAIL!THEY AREN'T "beaten to death and then publicly shamed for all eternity"!Where did you get such NONSENSES?!Get real!