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Just a spark!
I do believe this is the most realistic story I've ever read on Lit. Thank you, Og! ~Imp
An invitation ten years in the making.
Very inspirational tale. Good things do indeed come to those who wait and it's never too late to be reunited with your longtime love.
Great job!
Touching without being maudlin, a good look into the possiblities of life. As they say, it ain't over until the fat lady sings!
Pretty cool story!
Man, you really know how to throw mud at your characters! But it can all work well in the end. The world moves in mysterious ways. Nice story!
Boring
yeah, right
Touching...
and I very nice story. I'm reminded of the phrase 'false hope is better than no hope at all', but it seems that this story has a happy conclusion. Time can indeed change and work wonders. I can only imagine the tension and anticipation upon meeting again. Best wishes
nice :D
Very sweet, romantic, and super cute.
The Og Touch
I've really come to appreciate Og's touch: gentle, humane, and civilized, and surprisingly refreshing. This one sparkles.
Another Fine Oggbashan Production
You have a superb gift for bringing out the humanity in your characaters. It just proves the Great Og can write first-rate short, short stories.
Rumple Foreskin
One thing I don't understand
Why in the world does he feel he needs his EX-wife's blessing, even without considering that *she* cheated on *him* while they were still married.
Perfectly wonderful
What a truly lovely story Ogg. Simple but eloquent. You said so much in such a short space of time. Good luck!
A wonderful story
Thank you Your Majesty,
The kind of proper attitude (in the end) we miss so much.
It was good of you to write it.
John/Namizujs
Budapest
excellent
A wonderful read, as usual.
Left me wanting Chapter 2
I liked this story, but it left me wanting another chapter. Is that a writer's dream or what?
More great work from Og!
Thanks for sharing this sweet tale of love. Gives one hope to read such things.
Ooh, you soft old hedgehog lover.
This is beautifully weighted and balanced. The spare prose emphasising the passion. It won't win either contest but it's one of my erotic favourites from the batch. You don't half write a good short story.
You write well!
Which are the Scots Stories? The ones I looked at were very good and without peculiar or unusual phrases.
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