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Your poem
has been mentioned in todays reviews
cute~
interesting, noticeable differences in the
two poets and loved the encirclement~
nice poem~
"...as if timbre wasn't enough..."
Lovely. You compliment one another.
Nice job!
...so this is the long-awaited poem from the two of you, eh? Well, hon, it was worth the wait. I don't know how you managed to get the intensity...the sensuousness, that this poem conveys while writing separately, but it speaks volumes about both your talents. Very evocative.
Unique
Interesting play on the differences between the two styles. Combined to create a very erotic and evocative poem
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