That's one of the better "first" efforts I've read. Nice story arch, believalbe characters and good dialogue. Congratulations on a job well done.
Rumple Foreskin
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Anonymous05/01/08
No
Let me see.. he wasn't 'ready' to follow her home or to allow her to have her hand on his leg but it was quite ok to f*k her in the alley? Get real.. Yoron
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Welcum
Congratulations on your first story, MC. The thought of fucking you in a back alley on Valentine's Day has made me hard!
Gus
Wonderful!
Sexy, hot and romantic. Perfect valentines stuff. Great first story :)
great story
Great story ... if you want to compete for worst story... you're going to have to try harder.. this one is wayyy too good!
Good work, Molly
That's one of the better "first" efforts I've read. Nice story arch, believalbe characters and good dialogue. Congratulations on a job well done.
Rumple Foreskin
No
Let me see.. he wasn't 'ready' to follow her home or to allow her to have her hand on his leg but it was quite ok to f*k her in the alley? Get real.. Yoron
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