All Comments on 'Castle in the Air'

This is one of the most well-written short stories I’ve ever read.

I eagerly await more! Great start.

So difficult coming with a comment worthy of your talent after reading this set of 3 stories (with more to come I hope).

The way you connected them together, especially this one... Brilliant. Loved that feeling when I figured out who it was about just a couple paragraphs before it's told explicitly.

Thanks so much, please keep on writing.

Very eloquent but spare narrative of regret - no promise made for future editions. A sad refrain to mirror the joy and promise of the other stories.

And am eagerly awaiting a follow-on chapter or story. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Really grateful for these comments as I particularly like this story. I'm aware it is a little downbeat but I am working on a follow up which should be more positive, could be a while though.

Please write more of this story :) Im all for realistic stories of women loving women.

I'm living with a broken heart, so reading of successful relationships helps me to have HOPE.

You have this way of making us feel this certain pain in our chest that I couldn't quite explain the intensity. It's just..... so pure and amazing and the words..... it's so rich. I'm literally out of words.

Wow .. you certainly have a way with words .. every one of these related stories has my eyes moist .. thanks for making me feel .. well done ❤️❤️

please write a follow up!

Reading through all your stories, absolutely love your writing talent! Thank you for giving us a beautiful ending with Ray and Sarah. Thank you again!

Thank you….

Ah, where've ye gone? Sad for us to've lost your voice.

Yes thats how ALL is changing and not for the better, just changing ...... Better or worse it can be if we compare but can we recall expereinces tastes feelings emotions or else from the past, nope ...... So now tell me the advantage becoming older , i haven'tfound any ....... Yeah most starting with the technology or life conditions or else and now my question, all what we had done is destroying our nature in a pervert speed and further more we have not learned to live in peace without a fucking damn stupid war, since ancient times, so what have we learned?

I really love your tale and your sight of life and the living ..... Perfect 🌟🌟🌟⭐️⭐️⭐️💝💝💝😔💖💖

Beautiful. Touching. Poignant. Melancholic.

Another 5 stars.

Excellent story

Love lost due to wilful means is the worst to stomach, even worse when you yourself have been the one to blame. I don’t have many regrets in my life, but that is one I’ll carry to my grave.

Beautiful!

working my way throe again thanks be happy well and safe a fan shayne