i found your stories and enjoy your writings so far...Thanks for sharing your talent with us and look forward to reading on, i see the length of time inbetween your chapters and started at this one i hope you can write more often i really enjoy this story so far...of course i do understand that thing called *life* that interferes with writing etc...hope all is well with you and yours and you have a Merry Christmas, happy holidays. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
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Anonymous04/28/07
Very...compelling.
That...story...was...absolutely...terrific...LOVE IT. I have just now become a big fan of your writing and I hope to hear soooo much more.
Sincerely
A BIG FAN
Storyline is compelling. Characterization is good, but you need some help with grammer. "ahead of the slave orginazation" (sic) should be "the head of" preferable, "the slavers." I love great stories. You could get published in print if you watch the grammer usage.
English
LOVE IT!
I love this story, great plot line so far! keep up the great work! please continue the story soon!
Great beginning.
Love it so far. Can't wait for the rest.
Glad....
i found your stories and enjoy your writings so far...Thanks for sharing your talent with us and look forward to reading on, i see the length of time inbetween your chapters and started at this one i hope you can write more often i really enjoy this story so far...of course i do understand that thing called *life* that interferes with writing etc...hope all is well with you and yours and you have a Merry Christmas, happy holidays. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Very...compelling.
That...story...was...absolutely...terrific...LOVE IT. I have just now become a big fan of your writing and I hope to hear soooo much more.
Sincerely
A BIG FAN
Grammer
Storyline is compelling. Characterization is good, but you need some help with grammer. "ahead of the slave orginazation" (sic) should be "the head of" preferable, "the slavers." I love great stories. You could get published in print if you watch the grammer usage.
Leanna DE-VIRGINIZE YOURSELF
YOU'LL ATTRACT FEWER BUYERS
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