All Comments on 'A Storm of Submission'

5*

I would have liked the story to have more dialog...maybe the next chapter, of which I hope is to follow.

Thank you for the read - it did it's job (LOL). Yes I enjoyed the story and a "fiver" from me. I enjoyed the development of Jim's eventual cuckolding in his wife's eyes. It made the outcome plausible. But I think I would have liked to see more description of Allie's surrender. The inner struggle of the heroine (if there was any) might have this story a best seller (smiles) but instead, she's having Mark paw her naked breasts, or is in her. You spent a lot of time on Allie, this would have rounded the story out.

Just incredible

Another great black man humiliates worthless little white man, and takes his wife.

All those moronic BBC stories are forgetting something fundamental:

If that black guy is so great, why can't he find good woman for his own, instead of looking to steal somebody's else.

Yeah... I know it is a fiction, but IT IS A CRAP FICTION!!!

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Loved it.

Loved this story!

Keep it going please. Great story and I hope that it is just part 1 a d theres at least 2 more parts.

Hubby sneaking in a nice touch. I'm sure seeing him there inflamed the bull. Would have been nice if the bull had the wife take him into her mouth for the cuckold to see.

Very hot xoxoxoxoxo Annette

After Mark finished up with Allie it would have been great if he had made Jim clean him up with his mouth.

Jim kicks his whoring wife’s pregnant ass to the curb. Allie is disowned by all her friends and family and Mark shirks his responsability to her and the child. She ends up a crack addicted street walker and her son a gang banger dead at 16. Just like real life

This was a hot and very well written story as I have come to expect from everyonesavoyeur. I understand the taboo factor involved with interracial sex. I just don’t understand the compulsion for showing the white husband as a worthless cuckold in awe of his rival while celebrating the black interloper as all powerful and masculine. Can’t one be celebrated without denigrating the other? Just my two cents...

Theakston

I had to take a break between chapters, I started the story at work, then finished it later with my cock in my hand. Nicely done. Ignore those comments like “should of this, I wish this”...fuck ‘em, your story, let the commenters write a better one!

A well written story, I did like the end when poor old cucky saw them fucking and he couldn't stop them,

I just loved the picture of cucky with his little cock in his sperm covered hand whilst his boss gave the best and deepest fuck the wife could ever imagine.

.He impregnated her too and hubby knew it.

Oh that must sting!

You are probably the best author in the Interracial section of Literotica. Each and every of your stories is extremely well-written. They are also - and i think this is very important - very believable. I can believe that something like what I read in one of your stories could happen, and that does a very lot for my enjoyment. I don't even have to mention that your writing is incredibly erotic and hot ;)

I look forward to part two. dominate wife. cuckold made. duties to be carried out. bring it on. Just wish I had read this story before I got married 50 years ago. my life would have been very different. honey moon in Jamaica.

So hot, a triple wanker if anything. Great to read about a primal alpha male breeding his woman. Sorry we cannot have a sequel where Mark continues giving Jim and Allie more children.

You are one of the best writers on Lit. Others of your works have achieved a certain wonderful balance. This story saddened me however. From beginning to end, there is only his wife's contempt and anger at Jim. I have only been involved in this from the Alpha side, but it strikes me that this is already a "relationship" painted so asymmetrically in terms of the wife's contempt and constant dissatisfaction that there was no love, from her side, in it from the beginning. At best she showed a begrudging impatience; more often explicit anger. There was nothing in it from the beginning, nothing left to betray, and nothing left of her husband but utterly diminished dust.

got himself another whore to work for him. Another racist story. Not interracial at all.

More wimp cuck stories, hasn't there been enough of this on here?

Staring at her husband while his boss’s huge black cock uses her pussy cements his role as submissive.

Another great story from everyonesavoyer. Very sexy how the faithful wife is lured into the black bosses bed and very quickly ends up climbing into the bed with her and claiming her fertile pussy as his own. As the black man takes the husbands place hubby stands by and watches. I loved the ending where the boss seeds the wife's fertile pussy and the wife looks over at her husband his limp cock covered in his own orgasm drips his seed uselessly in his hand as another mans seed coats her egg. I hope this story is continued and we get to read about the wife visiting the bosses office or the boss comes over to dinner and takes the wife again in her marital bed while hubby watches and strokes his cock.

I look forward to a second chapter where Allie and her husband have a chance to reconnect with conversation and cuddling establishing reconciliation, or, I figure with her impregnated by Mark this couple will part ways. There was no open conversation beforehand between this married couple, they have to cover that ground now or emotions will override any rationale to keep their marriage together. Gave it a 5 for potential.

I wish my wife had a big black boss

This might be the hottest story I've read on here thus far.... And I just realized that the married couple may be stuck there another night or two, meaning that this story is far from over! Wow. Can't wait...

Damn good. Excellent conception (if you will!) of the story. Well thought out and very well written. My hat is off to you sir, I've read your work over some time and you are on a pro level at this point. Too bad Penthouse Variations is not still around! You would be a great writer for them.

The only downside for me is the length. When it runs over 2 pages on this forum, I find myself dreading a long reading. I realize you need a certain length to develop characters and a plot line (as opposed to the old "I've always wanted to see my wife with another man. . . crap of the 70's)

I sure can't fault you however.

Loved the wife POV. Wish more of them came from her point of view! Excellent work as always.

I loved the theme and the flow and agree it’s very well written Only thing I’d push for is the cuck ending. I don’t like that he opted to go the route of giving in to jerking off. It would have been hotter if her last vision of him was teary eyed with a big wet splooge spot on his pants

It does beg for another chapter

Love the ever-present Alpha dominance. The ovulating hormones adds a very nice driver for the wife's fall into temptation. Keep up the amazing work!

My favourite author on here. Love the story arcs and writing style. Interesting variation with the woman’s POV although as a wannabe cuck I prefer the husbands view . Thanks for the story and keep up the great work-I little look forward to the next instalment

Loved the buildup of what we all knew was going on, and to happen. Having been in a similar situation like Jim catching Mark and Allie, I loved Jim's reaction and automatic response of being a natural born cuckold. Thanks great read!

This is the perfect story. The buildup. The character's struggle with their own inhibitions. The visual imagery. The flow. The dynamic between the Alpha and his target. And of course, the payoff. To top it off, there is potential for an even more provocative "second chapter." Cheers!

Wow ! really spicy one to read.My wife also like this story very much.Thank u.Expecting more like this type.

Great story, I love your descriptive writing style and buildup. I'm hoping there's more to come. One of my favorites

Very good everything.. I loved it so much. Thank you for sharing it.

OMG I read this at work and kept being interrupted. Fiction, oh I am soo envious of Allie.

Thank you

I love this story very, very much!

Yes, it is 4 pages long but trust me every scene the erotic tension to a higher level. Every paragraph from this story adds something to the storyline.

HI EVERYBODY: IF YOU ARE INTO BOSS-FUCKS-WIFE STORIES,

THIS ONE IS A MUST READ. PERIOD.

The story so far has 46,810 views & 124 favorites

(which means i'm not the only one who loves it).

That was one of the hottest stories I've read on this site. Loved from the woman's perspective. Hope there is a second part!

When can we get chapter 2 of this story?

Incredibly arousing story.....had my wife read it, she was aroused, I'm hoping it'll make my dream closer to reality!

Another power black boss cuckold story. We have enjoyed them all. It is a favorite scenario for us to play. Your words bring the action and fantasy to life

very very hot story...….

This is one of the best interracial cuckold stories I've read in a long, long time. The mental progression of the wifeWas engrossing. The long buildup of tension between her and her husband, and his boss, was perfectly paced and believable. The only way I can fault it is that it doesn't have a chapter 2! I'm begging the author to let us know what happened next!

Man o man you all live in a fantasy land! I am really surprised that Mark's cock didn't talk too! It did everything else! In your fantasy world all women bow down to the biggest cock....if that were true then we all know in fantasy land there is one even bigger just around the corner. lol...you writers make me laugh!

Great story line with a perfect progression of the feelings between the wife and her husband's boss. Great descriptive dialogue throughout. Looking forward to further chapters and the obvious intrigue they may contain.

I LOVED this story, and, I hated this story. While reading it i felt the angst, felt the anger, felt the humiliation, but most of all I felt my very hard dick. This story was soo erotic, arousing. I am a huge fan of Cuckold erotica and your story took me there!

Older boss finally gets in his young wife's knickers off and puts his baby into his wife's cunt as he watches and wanks

As your pen name suggests, everyone's a voyeur, & admittedly i am no exception to the rule!

This story turned me on big time.

It also brought back memories of pivotal events in my life that happened years ago. Those events shook my psyche so powerfully & profoundly that my hitherto-dormant voyeur side was brought to the fore.

In each of those instances my wife was either groped, or her body was felt & caressed; in one instance she was outright propositioned; once she dissapeared from a big ass party with a rich guy, only to reappear at the party 45 minutes later. Each time i was like a rabbit caught in headlights, totally paralysed. My mind was foggy. I was in a hypnotic transe of sorts...

I LOVE THIS STORY.

Thank you! You are the best... if not the bestest!

this is fantasy no real men will allow this , you are ether bisexual or homosexual .if My bos do this to my wife :) will be his last women he can use his penis

why do theses writers thinks ever male is a cuck and ever woman want a black cock no wonder men treat women so badly -1 for me

The storyline was masterfully crafted.

THE WIFE IN THIS STORY IS A KEEPER.

Thanks for the story, a good erotic believable fantasy/reality. Hubby will just have to accept it and still throw her out.

The behaviour of submissive husband is accurately depicted.

ALLIE IS A KEEPER!

Excellent story along a similar, but not parallel, line, to Business and Pleasure. I compared the Jim's on my comment there. I agree that here the marriage may not survive, especially if Mark and Allie continue.

Also, i loved the comment by Socalhubby on 7/13/18. Some other commenter said there was not enough fevotion to Allie's progression to submit. But i agree with Socal that the progression was superb--plenty of introspective thoughts by her as to her slow conversion. Thanks!

loved the beginning of your story, right from the beginning...good pace, nice perspectives. loved the kinky ending with her being impregnated by his boss.

Just the middle part lost a little of the magic. why not let Jim be present during breakfast. same scene in front of the window, but she feels at unease. she would naturally tell him that it is not ok to grope her in front of her husband...only that Mark will send Jim away to work instead of stopping the touching.

"Jim leave, check yesterdays contracts again, you are making your wife feel uneasy!"

now, she is lost and gives in....rest of the story unchanged

wow very hot, great sexual anticipation, and finish

The story is very very erotic & totally realistic!

The storyline was intelligently conceived & masterfully crafted.

Jim is a complex character. He has submissive personality. He simply can not stand up to people of authority, let alone to people with dominant personality.

Jim has had a strong voyeur side since God knows when, but he was not aware of it.

When Mark lifted Allie's skirt and caressed her butt cheeks, Jim must have been totally paralysed to act. He was in a hypnotic trance of sorts. All he could think of was how not to make a scene. Also he deep down knows he is not a sexual athlete, while his wife is a sexual dynamo.

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I became aware of my strong, hetherto dormant, voyeur side in Punta Cana, Dominican. My wife had joined a beach volleyball team. One evening after they won a friendly match they all went to celebrate. I was invited but told my wife I would join them later. I found the group but my wife was not there. "She is probably by the beach bar" I was told. Yes, she & a male teammate were sitting on bar stools, he was caressing her knee & her bare thigh to near her panties. I stayed in the dark & watched. I was no different than Jim.

Where is the rest of the story ? Very erotic , super sexy but incomplete .

Most of your stories are like this one ……… no proper end .

Finish the story !

Absolutely loved the story. Very well written. I can't wait to read your other stories.

People do like this story; it has got 1.92 favorites per 1,000 views (very few stories get more than 0.5 fav. per 1,000 views!) Bravissimo!

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And then what happened...

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That one took care of my blue balls big time....more than once. Thanks !!!

It's very erotic & KINKY when a married woman decides to go to bed with HER HUSBAND'S BOSS

Be careful how you treat your man. I had a similar story that I thought my husband was ok with me being with his boss. We had partied together on several occasions flirting dancing drinking ect. there never seem to be a problem. One night his boss demanded when special clients were in town that he needed to attend and to bring me along because both clients wives were going to be with them. The wives and I visited while the men took care of business. I was to entertain so we had a few drinks. After the men were done they joined us except Steve my husband which Robert his boss had asked him to finish some paper work that shouldn't take much more than an hour. a very large home 5 bedroom each had its own bath really large entertainment room alsom big screen TV with the outstanding sounds system. Robert turned on some good dancing music. Robert had already had shown the client's the rooms they would be using.. We started dancing and I actually thought Robert was a little different being to aggressive with me. I should have stopped him or at least warned him but with the drinks I had with the wives plus Robert was keeping me supplied I was feeling no pain. Steve had not joined us yet when the client's said they were tired and wanted to turn in. Robert said I should come along and help everyone get settled in. I said I had better sit down and wait for Steve. Robert said Steve is a big boy and could take care of himself. I don't know where it came from other than the alcohol but I said you better believe he's a big boy. With that Robert smacked my butt and I said quit. After getting the others to their room Robert took me to a different room which I thought was for Steve and I. I was starting to really feel Pho be reminded and Robert McGann undressing me had me laid on the bed just as I heard Steve holler what's going on he was standing in the doorway and Robert said don't worry we're just having a little fun leave us alone she will back with you in the morning go to the entertainment room and entertain yourself. I think I started to sober up real quick and that's about when Steve came charging Robert knocking him clear off of the bed up against the. window then give him another shove and Robert through the window and he was outside in the snow. Steve said to me let's get out of here I will not work for this SOB any longer. On his way out he deleted all of the work that he had done earlier and just a matter of a minute and just tore up all of the contracts That he had worked on that evening. It was a quiet ride home and I was very ashamed of myself because I had starting to sober up thinking about what could have happened. After we had gotten hold he started asking questions about what all had happened when he was not present. I tried to be as honest as possible. After we talked about all night I knew that I would have to walk the line to patch things up I guess I had let things get out of control with his boss. On Monday he called a competitor that had been trying to hire him away from Robert. they came to terms and Steve accepted the position with a new company. Also Robert called Monday trying to patch things up with Steve and it would not hear none of it telling Robert Heiden blew his Chance by being so arrogant and irresponsible and trying to damage our family. Robert was saying that he didn't do it to damage our family he just thought it'd be a little fun for us that's Wednesday blew up again and said right fun for him not us and hung up. life did go on thanks for Steve being the thoughtful and understanding person that he is.

This story conveys what I wished had happened with my wife. She was already a hotwife but would not consider having sex with a black man. My fantasy that I really wanted to become reality was to see my wife have sex with a black man and become addicted to black cock. After several months of black sex I would convince her to go off the birth control and have pregnancy risk sex with her black lover. I was hoping she would end up pregnant by her black lover just like in your story. I definitely liked this story.

I was shocked at first when I discovered my wife was having sex with her boss. However, I did come to terms with it and our own sex life improved immensely as did her salary. So a win for everyone.

Hey there, just wanted to say thanks for the Tags, it let me choose whether or not I wanted to read this. I didn’t because it’s just not my kind of story. I prefer full consent of all parties concerned. For me it would only be fun if my husband was fully onboard with what was going on.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (UK)

Re: Be Careful, yeah, exactly what you said. As noted above it only works if everyone’s in agreement, I suppose it would reverse the outcome in this story, because the m/f addition to the couple’s sex kinda makes them a living breathing sex toy.

that is some HOT writing!

My wife went to her Christmas party which was been held out of town.

As she was getting ready to leave for the weekend, she reminded me that her boss would probably hit on her again, especially when I wasn't there.

I smiled at her said I hope he does, she looked at me and said, do you really want him to fuck me.,

I held her hand, looked into her eyes and said YES. I really want you to let him fuck your pussy, as aften as he can. So will you let him fuck you Please.

Then I told her that I loved her.

She smiled and said he will definitely have me all weekend, and she showed me a text message he sent her.

It said, can't wait to see you, just thinking about you gives me a hard on.

He was always saying things like that to her, but she never gave it up to him.

I had a hard on reading it, and said look at my cock just reading that text.

So please let him fuck you, she agreed if he came on to her she would let him fuck her.

I took her phone and sent him a text, if we are going to do this, i want you to do it all weekend. Because I am wet thinking about it.

A few minutes later she got a text from him, saying I promise you wont regret it and sent a photo of his hard cock. It looked to be around 8ins and tick.

He asked her to send a photo of herself naked so he would be sure that she was willing to have sex with him.

I took a few photos of her in different positions showing her off and leaving nothing to the imagination. I sent them to him, from her phone, saying this is her husband, hope you like the photo I just sent you, and I would be very grateful if you could fuck my wife all weekend, and Please fuck her just before you send her back to me.

Well he did all that I asked him to do, and now he calls whenever he is in town to our home and has his way with her.

Myself and my wife love our lifestyle, she gets satisfaction with men with bigger cocks than me, I get satisfaction knowing she is happy and I get a fanny full of cum.

I think your stories (all of which I love) should end up by finishing the husbands humiliation by having him clean up the lovers. I think further submission and a little bi-sexual play would wrap it up nicely.

We are from India and pure brahmins. I was posted in a rather remote site where no restaurants. Once my boss a 43 years old divorced man with muscular body came to visit project.

We are in early 30's with no kids since married just a year ago.

After the project visit I called him for dinner and stay. My wife prepared nice dinner. All veg since we brahmins. After dinner we had small talk and then slept. Next day he went back to town.

My wife told me he is very polite but aggressive. She liked his company since he was our first guest.

After a month he again paid a surprise visit. And stayed with us for a night.

A month later Shoeb sir came at around 11 am when I had already left to site. Vinita gave him tea and he had bath. He has also brought some gifts for us. Evening we both me and Sir returned to home. I asked her to prepare good food spicy as he liked. Upon his request in earlier visit I had arranged bottles of Scotch whisky and a crate of beer. Vinita not very fond of but allows me to have rarely.

The seeds of game of lust has already sown when he came directly our home and had bath n tea snacks. It was later told to me by my wife. During earlier two visits early morning she had given him tea in room when I was sleeping. And he had pulled her and kissed. Initially she got angry but the aggressiveness he showed was liked by her. And when he was taking bath she went to give towel he had pulled her inside and did long kissing. And they had showered in tight embrace.

I never suspected and was told after this incidence.

We reached home and she greeted as if surprised to have him as guest. After freshening we started our small party.

But she allowed to have beer and whiskey. Shoeb my boss is Muslim with darker skin. He and me were having whiskey. After one round he asked Vinita to join us drinking. She is not drinker but had with me beer twice. She refused but then he took her hand and pulled closer. And whispered something that she agreed. Shoeb filled her glass and to my surprise put to her lips. I was stunned but kept quiet. With a smile she relished. We had second round of wine. Then Shoeb asked me to play some light music. When CD started playing he stood and pulled her for dance. Again I was stunned. They danced in fast and medium pace but close. She allowed him to hold her waist and when his back was facing me I was sure he caressing her pure brahmin ass. Her little moan surprised and confirmed.

It continued for a while and in the last song which was slow n romantic Vinita encircled her arms around his back and later on neck and I watched them kissing. Obviously his large palms caressing her butter butt. Even being close I saw her 36" sized boobs pressed on his chest. She enjoyed dancing with drinking because in between he made her have whisky from his glass.

During dinner he praised her lot even asked her to offer few bites.

I made his bed in guest room which is double bed. In the gallery we were smoking and Vinita came after finishing plates. And had brought sweet dishes. We three enjoyed it. To praise her for basundi he pulled to lap and I astonished to see her obediently sat on his lap and allowed to kiss her.

He then asked me he needs a woman in bed. I told him right now not possible because of remote area. He said he want none other than my wife.

She said it's our duty of hospitality.

No problem for me since he has already made me horny.

We went in our room to change and there she allowed me to kiss with his taste. Also she asked me to lick her because she said later it will taste different. I did.

She changed into nice slutty gown which was gifted by my sis. (Few days later my wife told me that my sis has also bedded her and her Hubby's boss)

Boss was waiting in living room. Shoeb was glad to see her in that slutty red chillie gown. First he praised her beauty thanked me for new hospitable attitude and scooped her and took her to room. While walking they kissed hotly.

I remained silent but very hard.

Next hour only sounds of her moaning calling his name oh fuck me Shoeb. Your black cock is so bigger than him. I loved your pulling kissing caressing butt and squeezing boobs.

After their first round Shoeb called me to bring coffee. When I went inside she was covered with a sheet. They took cups and suddenly he pulled her sheet. All nude. Pussy glistening with his cream.

And many Hickey on boobs.

Whole night she was in his bed. Early morning around 6 she came to our bedroom with cup of tea for me. I asked what he doing she said sleeping soundly. He had fucked 3 times and once she gave bj. So tired but happy. Hearing that I kissed her tasting him on her lips. She asked me to go down. I did with enthusiasm. Truly the taste was different Yummy.

Next day he cancelled his return and stayed with us. Again evening party Vinita chose a salwar Kurtz tightly fitting. During drinks she sat on his lap only. Lot of kissing squeezing caressing going on right before me. In between she kissed me too. Post dinner Shoeb made her half nude and danced. Then she declared that tonight places of sleeping will be exchanged. He took her to our marital bed and me in guest room.

After first round of 2 hours romance he asked me to bring coffee.

And while they having coffee in nude his hand on her boobs and her hand caressing his thick cock.

Then she said you take your share and lick my pussy. Clean it. I had to obey. I enjoyed fully. Shoeb Sirs thick cum. When I was returning he pulled me and we all slept together.

Vinita and Shoeb had thrice more times. In front of me he took her anal cherry. And I cleaned later.

For next one year every month he visited and Vinita was his wife.

When very confident, and/or very powerful, and/on rich men start touching my wife's knees, thighs and ass, I literally freeze, I am paralysed, my mind turns foggy, and I just watch other men caress & grope my wife... In those moments I am in a hypnotic trance of sorts...

I still can't understand how a man can let some arrogant self centered A__ do something like this to his wife also his family. While camping I noticed my wife move away from me. Let me clear this. We had 1 tent 3 adults 3 children. Her friend Jon I thought he was our friend but after what happened he is not my friend and I told her so.. His 1 and our 2 children ended up sleeping in the truck. Back to what happened. I couldn't hear everything but I heard Jon saying you are crazy girl what would Steph do if he caught us? Nancy my wife said she could handle me. I don't think nothing much happened because of his fear she came back to me in a few minutes and rolled into me. I didn't respond pretending to be asleep. I made sure they were never alone that weekend. After that I would bring Jon up in conversation that I didn't mind them just talking because of the different committees they served on. She asked what was this about? I said I may not be the smartest person around her but not the dumbest either. Well what is that supposed to mean? WHAT HAPPENED IN THE TENT? She looked shocked. WELL WHAT HAPPENED? We had a lengthy talk. I thought things were understood but later thought it didn't mean anything thing apparently to Nancy. It had been awhile something was off. We talked all the time but not on this subject. While our daughter was visiting a red flag came up. After she left. I asked if she had been with Jon again she confirmed she had. I kept asking questions she finally confessed she had sex years ago. I asked what happened to day? She said they went to see Bob who wasn't doing well. Bob was a good friend of mine also. I said I think I can trust Bob I don't know about you two. After asking several questions she said they didn't even touch each other. I told her she didn't know how close I was when our daughter was there to walk out but didn't want our children to know what she had done that might have split the family. She got kinda huffy and asked where will you go? I said I didn't have a clue maby just sleep in the truck. She calmed down real quick I finally did. I stayed home we had a long talk and she agreed to never be alone with him again and life goes on.

More please! Did she cuckold her husband, did she get pregnant???

Well i came reading that one lol. Very sexy. Well written. Good read.

If you read the whole thing thats what makes a story great. If its not you end up skipping chunks. In this case you got the balance right.

A great story no holes barred. My mind drifted momentarily earlier in the story when the boss confronts her with "you lied to me". That line made my cunt spasm because I thought he was going to tell her she needed to be punished. (referring back to the time her smacked her ass at the Christmas party foreshadowing). So in my mind's eye I saw him playfully banter with her before her nap and she teases/dares him to smack her ass for lying to him.....and beginning her true submission to him. I would hope the descriptive prose highlights how the spanking started playful but became increasingly erotically painful....ending with her tired needing the nap.

Then later when he fucks her from the back and he smacks her ass while fucking , I wanted more reaction from her how the smacks to her ass hurt so good. Later her husband can't believe she wants the boss to smack her as her fucks her. She is his submissive cunt.

A great story. You are an exceptional writer.

Brad

My wife Jan and I along with 3 other coworkers with their spouses were at my bosses house for a party. My boss was single a big black guy who had flirted with the spouses including my wife but no one took offence of it. This night was a little different. When I noticed the drinks he was giveing me were strong I started dumping them in different plant pots so I could keep a clear mind. Towards the end I was acting pretty drunk one of my coworkers Larry was talking to me saying keep an eye on Derrick our boss the area manager he's a womanizer and has been hitting on my wife pretty hard and I should stop drinking to protect my family. I looked at him and smiled. He said you sly fox I should have known. I said if you would I might need a witness. What do you need? Ok would you just act like you leave but not really hid your car walk back and take pictures videos anything that would give me prof of his actions. He left the same time as the first couple took his wife home and faked a phone call saying I had a flat tire and needed my help. He hurried back parked away from Derricks house and ran to it. I was layed back on a recliner with my wife setting on my lap. I was acting like I was out of it she was pretty much out of it. After the last couple left Derrick made his move and took hold of Jans hand saying come with me baby and let's have some fun. She was to far gone to resist. Just as soon as I could I text my buddy and he said he was already recording. I let him in quickly and went to the room ASAP. I will tell you Derrick was a fast mover he was already naked and was starting on Jan she was saying no no no you can't rape me just as I jumped and kicked him in the side hearing a cracking sound. Derrick went to the floor saying you SOB I fire you. He didn't anymore than get it out when I kicked him in his privates. Larry helped me get Jan to the car. The next day was Sunday Jan and I was talking I could tell she was unaware of the most of what happened the night. When I told her she said she couldn't believe it. I showed her what was recorded. Actually got sicker and vomited. When she recovered she ask what were we going to do? I said Jack and I were going to HR Monday and we did luckily Jack had made 6 copies. When I got to work I explained to my forman I needed to go to HR. He asked if he could help with anything? I said I thought I would be ok. He said ok but let him know if I needed anything. I Thanked him. Jack didn't go with me to HR.. They just didn't act as aggressive as I thought they would like the stories I had heard.. After I was done and they were through asking questions I was told they would be in touch. Two days later I hadn't heard anything. I called Tom Jackson the man Derrick replaced. Tom had moved on up the ladder he was also a black man. He asked me to meat him Saturday at his home. This man was mostly business. He Thanked me for coming. There were 2 other men there. I was a little worried but was soon at ease when Tom said this was not Derricks first time in question. All in all he was let go and I was compinsated witch I called hush money. I was also told I couldn't tell anyone about it I had to sign a paper. And of course Derrick threatened me. Well about 4 months later Jan and I was out when she went to the restroom I thought she had been to long I went to look. The hall that went to the restroom Derrick was keeping Jan from leaving. There was a man watching them. I tapped him on the shoulder putting my finger to my lips. He said I think that woman might be in trouble that guy won't let her go so I was going to try to help her but he's a big man and you know the police around here are half afraid of blacks because the way things get twisted with the news. I said that's my wife and I'm not afraid will you take a video with my phone. Absolutely he said. I handed him my phone and went for broke. I got close and hollered hey Derrick I would advise you to quit threatening my wife that fine gentlemen is recording this. Derrick told me to F___ off and swung at me but I ducked and he missed and I kicked him in the knee. That slowed him down but didn't stop him and he hit me knocking me down. I jumped up and kicked him in the knee again this time he was hurt pretty bad. He groaned saying you little white punk I'm gonna beat you to death. Jan screamed help. He came at me and I jumped out of the way I knew I couldn't let him get a hold of me. He could move very fast thank goodness. He came at me again and I moved out of the way again and kicked him in the butt making him hit the wall pretty hard. The bouncers arrived and they were grabbing me when the guy videoing said you are on the wrong guy. I yelled get out of here and said send that to these two numbers. They finally let me go. Jan asked if we were going to press charges? I said yes just so it would be on record. Derrick moved away after the court was done all he got was a fine and probation go figure. I wish there were more writer's that wrote about men that protected their families by not being cuckold.

Hottest one yet. She got her fill all right and the husband really enjoyed it too!!!!

This story is a tour de force. Period.

I gave you a 5.5 (110%, ❤💚❤💚❤+)!

Excerpt from the story:

"... I was willingly giving Mark's cock access to my most intimate place, inviting him to take me. After the years of inappropriate teasing, years of sexy innuendo, years of flirting. After years of my husbands complacency, his willingness to allow a sexual chemistry, a sexual tension, to develop between me and another man. I was finally going to do it. I was finally going to let my husband's boss fuck my married pussy..."

👍👍!

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

This story is very very popular. It has as of Jun 19 2021 got 243k views and 487 "faves" wich is 2 faves per 1k views, a fantastic ("triple A" faves-to- views ratio!*)

In my book this stoty is a MUST READ.

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* Most stories get less than 0.5 faves per 1k views.

My husband asked me to write this. My husband was kinda jealous but I understand because men flirt with me and I do my best to ignore them without causing any trouble. My husband is an exmarine a trained fighter so to not cause problems. His big black boss started coming onto me the first time we met. I politely asked him not to bother me because it would cause problems. He said he could handle anything that came his way and I was not to worry. I just said forget it and leave me alone for his own sake and our family and walked away. Later as the party was ending there were just a handful people left. I was helping another wife my husband and his boss clean up. I found myself alone in the kitchen with the boss again and he came onto me again. Only this time he was more aggressive and pushed me forward jerking down my pants and panties. I stepped down with my high heel hoping to hurt his foot and brought my other foot to his privates both most have been good shots because he groaned loud twice and fell to the floor. My husband and 1 coworker and his wife were there Instantly asking what was going on? I said I don't know your boss just fell I think he's been drinking too much. My husband bent down to his boss asking if he was okay did he need help? His boss said going to have to cut back on the drinking would you help me to my recliner? Sure. I asked if he'd like an ice pack and he said sure. When I took it to him he mouth that he was sorry. I whispered just don't try anything again or I would tell my husband and I was sure it would be a lot worse. Later on the way home my husband asked what I whispered to his boss? I just comforting him calling him a little baby. He said I was bad and asked if I was sure that was all that was said and I needed to tell the rest it would be best sooner than later. So I told him everything. He thanked me for being honest and said if anything came up again it would be best to let him know ASAP. I promised I would. By the way his boss treated me very respectful from then on.

* a fantastic ("triple A") faves-to- views ratio!

Outstanding!

I copy pasted an earlier anon comment because I see myself in that anon.

Quote: "Anonymous 7 months ago

LOVED IT (❤): ***** (5.0)!

When a very confident, and/or very powerful, and/on rich man starts touching my wife's knees, thighs and ass, I literally freeze, I am paralysed, my mind turns foggy, and I just watch that other man caress & grope my wife... In those moments I am in a hypnotic trance of sorts..." Unquote.

KINKY! (It's a compliment, OK?)

I love boss-fucks-wife stories.

This is a five star story: ★★★★★ (5.0).

This sex story is a success story in terms of how it was received by readers.

Rating 4.54 stars.

245.3k views.

491 favorites.

It is practically 2 faves per 1k views. This story is very popular.

It also have got 90 comments in about 3 years.

I have copy pasted first 3 rows of an earlier comment because I think the same; all I can add is: Bravissimo!

Quote:

"Anonymous, 21 days ago

This story is a tour de force. Period.

I gave you a 5.5 (110%, ❤💚❤💚❤+)!"

Unquote.

Bravissimo! ★★★★★ (5.0 = 100%)!

If you just stand there, smiling like an idiot when your boss touches your wife's ass, Than you will end sitting in the coner with small cock held by your cum covered hand

Re gpeta (3 days ago)

You got that one right! I'll give you that.

But a man who has a strong voyeur side, subconsciously or consciously, wants to see his wife groped, caressed, yes! even fucked by another man (or men).

I am not trying to be a philosopher,

but it takes all kinds...

Damn that was smoking hot. Whew! You really know how to create a connection between the reader and the characters, making the seduction very delicious. The issue I have is that I also feel a connection with husband's pain and sadness. The cuckold stuff then diminishes my erotic high. For me, if she was a single woman, or an employee herself, it would have sent me through the roof. It would be empowering. Throw in a bull and a timid hubby, and suddenly a wife turns into a monster, forsaking her marriage, her family and her health for a man's big dick. The cuckold situation is weird for me. There is pain and jealousy and fear and hopelessness in these stories. I don't find that sexy and damn it, I just want to get off!

Love it...and why not coming up with a next chapter..!

This was smoking hot indeed, ★★★★★

[5+ (5.25 = 105% "above expectations.")]

Excerpt from p. 1 of the story:

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"How could you watch him grab me like that!? You just stood there, smiling like an idiot!"

Jim was clearly regretful, red faced and embarrassed, "I'm really sorry babe. We were all drunk, and I didn't know how to react. I didn't want to cause a scene."

"Better to let your boss grope me! God Jim, I cannot fucking believe you!" I rarely cursed, but the situation, and the alcohol, had me inflamed on a level I rarely reached.

"You're lucky no one else was in the room! What if someone else had seen?"

"He wouldn't have done it if anyone else was there." Jim replied.

His response only angered me further. "Oh so no big deal then! Only my husband got to see!"

(Unquote).

Awesome. Real. I'm a older married wife that shared a wild weekend of sex with a black stranger. But first, let me say that the story was on point by the way the boss was dominant, took what he wanted with zest and pure lust. This is what was so awesome for me ... the feeling of a man that wanted me, took me, and didn't ask or wanted my approval but took me from pure lust and passion for my pussy. From the first kiss to several wild orgasms to the sensation of being eye to eye and the feelings of the final deep thrusts, the rush of his body, the feel of his cock pouring his hot cum deep in my pussy and the look on his face as he lusted after my pussy. Not to mentioned the verbal sweet music that kept me high, and hungry to give him my body. And yes, like in the story, the slapping of my ass, and how he changed positions, his hands that toyed with my tits and my nipples....and the words that seem awful, except when you are being fucked and lusted after. Yes, I was struck with size, but mostly the girth of his cock, that sent shudders of feelings through me...seeing it erect, which seemed to dominate the vision and my thoughts as it was pushed into me, and the feeling of it parting my pussy lips and the feel of it stretching me and for one brief moment my hand felt it inside me. Though I know I expressed the almost violent entry and penetration, his respond of what I'd normal consider vulgar was like a hit of pure sexual sensations. While my husband and I have had great sex, it was nothing compared to how he took me, the way he fucked and the desire, lust that my body game me. I have had orgasms, but nothing compared to the multiple ones he game me.