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Outstanding!
...oh, my God, logophile, what a sexy, sad, stimulating, frustrating, romantic story! It was a roller-coaster ride!
Most of all, I love the way it was written, taking us all over your emotional map. Great stuff (as usual!)
Well done
Very well done with very honest emotion. And brilliantly edited too!
Oh, man!
Very nice. Love the ending! ~Imp
Coitus Interruptus
Well written but strangely shaped. The climax came at the start and it ended in frustration, like a snake with a beautiful head and an ugly tail.
Not just good, but real good
Logo,
I agree with Doc, that story had about the oddest organization I've ever come across--but it worked. A unique, enjoyable read. Congratulations on a job well done.
Rumple Foreskin :cool:
an interesting read...
And very well written indeed! thanks for the mention -it was my pleasure :)
Neat read
Logophile, That was a neat read. I liked how you organised it. You made it look easy while I know I wouldn't be able to write a story this way.
Whew...
What a set up, I felt cheated. Kind of like the lady, huh? Good work and an interesting turn of events. Good luck!
congradulations on another great one
A nice turn of events... I loved it!
Frustration at its finest
you made me feel the frustration of your character. No easy feat, that. Great job, Logo!
Great!
But I knew it would be. Keep it up!
Terrific!
Hot, hot, hot! The tag line was priceless. Great job!
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what a great story! I can totally relate, but I so wish I couldn't!
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This was no ordinary wank story, dispite what your sig line implies. Very well written.
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