All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 01'

cant wait to read the rest

Please continue! Very good story, well-written and interesting. Good character development. I am intrigued and want to see more!

Love it so far. Can't wait to read the rest.

This has a great beginning, please continue. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Very interesting. Nicely developed, well written story. Can't wait to see more.

i have to say, i am not really into romance, until i read this. it have laid the basis for a lovely story. keep 'em coming.

i love it. romance has never seemed like it held so much to come. cant wait to read the next installment.

i love it. romance has never seemed like it held so much to come. cant wait to read the next installment.

I like the characters and the setup, but your grammar is terrible and you have words confused left and right. Get a good editor, and I think this story will shine! :)