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Fun With A New Toy

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/24/05

S'almost funny.....

You made almost no mention of whether you were getting off as you were fucking his ass or whether he got off when you fucked his ass. One, the other or both, which was it? Or neither?

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by sexmate01/24/05

Hmmmmmmmmm?

I would have liked to have heard the kid scream and his comments after he got slammed! I would have liked to of had more torture! Then left the pictures for his dad and mom anyway!
Thanks for Writing!
Sexmate

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by Anonymous08/09/05

You guys who love girls being fucked in the ass...

should have enjoyed this

The thought of that BIG COCK splitting open the creeps rectum and pounding his shit back up into his large intestine made my day.

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by SHINOBI7501/28/07

BEING GREEDY AND SELFISH

Lol the little prick got exactly what he deserved. He wasn't content with what he got so his ass got split open and they turned him into their bitch. I would have took the blowjob and shut the fuck up.

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by Anonymous11/12/07

i wish it was me

i wish that was myass getting fucked by these toladys while i lick and fuckedthem

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by Anonymous10/23/09

twat

Twat is probably the worst and most unattractive word you can use to describe a pussy. A little bit of story added, with a little more proofreading and editing, and you'll be on your way.

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by Anonymous02/01/12

Doesn't seem realistic at all you might as well say he just bent over and took it. I mean really he has one had handcuffed and he can't defend himself, no throwing kicks punching hell even headbutting. Stop reading as soon as I got to that part.

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by Anonymous05/21/12

Good start,

But you should change it so that after they fuck him, they kill him and eat his corpse. This is my fetish and I would like to see it incorporated into more stories here on literotica.

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swweet

Didn't Like the story much but the revenge part was SWEEEEET!!!

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by mike250112/13/15

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I could feel his body stiffen up as I kept pushing this huge cock into his ass. I looked down to sees half of the toy was already in his ass. His moans were drowned out in Jenn's wet pussy.
""

Moans? He'd be screaming his head off like the little bitch he is getting assraped!

The stupid little retard should have made nice with his sister and just make a pact with them to all three get together twice a week! Family has to get along!

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by Anonymous05/27/16

Great!

Until she tore his rectum wall and blood gushed out. He died three hours later. The girls went to prison where they were forced to eat shit pies while being fisted by the lesbo guard.

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