by lianello
Fantastic story!! I loved every minute of it and could envision all of it!! You wrote a very fine story, with the right amount of detail!!! Keep up the good work!
Definitely a pecker picker upper. Just enough detail to make this story fun and exciting without going overboard.
I loved it. More please.
very erotic, kept me excited from start to finish. This is the kind of real life activity we all dream about. Very well written, not smutty or crass.
What a refreshing change to find a well written and believable story. Thank you! You cheered up my day!