Oh, what a fantasy! One I have had for a long time. You done a great job with the story. I was hard from start to finish. Would love to hear more about Sandra and Kelly's adventures with you!
I am SOOO aroused after reading your misdventures. You are an incredible writer, and i honestly hope to hear some more from such a high-quality author!
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Anonymous03/23/05
GREAT STORY
That sounded fun and highly erotic
GIVE ME MORE
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Anonymous09/20/05
HOTTT!!!
Took my breath away!!!
Can't wait for the next story!
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Anonymous09/28/05
2-4-1 01
Excellent - great 3-way action... all except the anal, which I abhor!
Lukas
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Anonymous10/17/05
abhor anal?
No wonder we kicked the brits out of the new world over 200 years ago! Bunch of tight assed wimpy children. Why in the fuck are you on an "erotic" web site if you don't enjoy doing "erotic" things (which anal sex CERTAINLY is)? ALL of the story was GREAT, INCLDING the anal!
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Anonymous03/22/06
bleh
I'm on an "erotic" site, but that doesn't mean I'm into bondage or fat chicks. And let's leave nationality out of this. There are plenty of Americans that are disgusted by anal sex.
like it but obviously totally unrealistic...
i like the three way action though and i agree not all americans like anal and some brits (or english people?) like anal...mmm.
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Anonymous09/29/07
unrealistic
totally unrealistic no real guy would hang around after his sisters girlfriend imbaressed her so bad and came on to him also in front of his sister a normal guy would havegot out of the hot tub after his sister and her lover did and go to his room a pack and leave try to keep your stories soundng real not like a fanatacy
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Anonymous05/08/09
awsum
man dis story is damn good and hot.....i wish i could do the same to my horny sis and her girlfriend....they both are damn hot....i always see my sis masturbating...and fucking her girlfriend in their room..and i loved watching it..just like the guy in story
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Anonymous04/03/12
Enjoyable but I didn't get off - thanks, you can do better!!! :)
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Anonymous10/17/13
my sis
,y G F deared me to fuck my sis now my G F fuck my sis
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Anonymous05/26/14
once again only one HONEST comment
i have to agree with UNREALISTIC no guy would have ever hung around after his sister and her lover left the hot tub. as soon as he knew the girls were in the bedroom he would have packed and left and never talked to either of them again. keep it out of the twilight zone please.
very hot
well done...and after reading it I was done as well.
very hot!
Awesome job! Keep up the good work
MMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Oh, what a fantasy! One I have had for a long time. You done a great job with the story. I was hard from start to finish. Would love to hear more about Sandra and Kelly's adventures with you!
Awsume!!!!!!!!!
Tonny
Very sexual
Hurry up.....we need part 2
Damn!!! What an awesome story!!
You wrote down what I think is every man's secret fantasy!! OMG how hot that story is!! Come on, give us more of those two hotties!!
What can you say
When you write everyman's wet dream what could be better?
Maybe if he gets them both pregnant?
Incredible!!!!
I am SOOO aroused after reading your misdventures. You are an incredible writer, and i honestly hope to hear some more from such a high-quality author!
GREAT STORY
That sounded fun and highly erotic
GIVE ME MORE
HOTTT!!!
Took my breath away!!!
Can't wait for the next story!
2-4-1 01
Excellent - great 3-way action... all except the anal, which I abhor!
Lukas
abhor anal?
No wonder we kicked the brits out of the new world over 200 years ago! Bunch of tight assed wimpy children. Why in the fuck are you on an "erotic" web site if you don't enjoy doing "erotic" things (which anal sex CERTAINLY is)? ALL of the story was GREAT, INCLDING the anal!
bleh
I'm on an "erotic" site, but that doesn't mean I'm into bondage or fat chicks. And let's leave nationality out of this. There are plenty of Americans that are disgusted by anal sex.
not bad
like it but obviously totally unrealistic...
i like the three way action though and i agree not all americans like anal and some brits (or english people?) like anal...mmm.
unrealistic
totally unrealistic no real guy would hang around after his sisters girlfriend imbaressed her so bad and came on to him also in front of his sister a normal guy would havegot out of the hot tub after his sister and her lover did and go to his room a pack and leave try to keep your stories soundng real not like a fanatacy
awsum
man dis story is damn good and hot.....i wish i could do the same to my horny sis and her girlfriend....they both are damn hot....i always see my sis masturbating...and fucking her girlfriend in their room..and i loved watching it..just like the guy in story
Enjoyable but I didn't get off - thanks, you can do better!!! :)
my sis
,y G F deared me to fuck my sis now my G F fuck my sis
once again only one HONEST comment
i have to agree with UNREALISTIC no guy would have ever hung around after his sister and her lover left the hot tub. as soon as he knew the girls were in the bedroom he would have packed and left and never talked to either of them again. keep it out of the twilight zone please.
Excellent work.
Amazing story. I look forward to more of your work.
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