May need another edit, but it was a fun little story. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple Foreskin
by
Anonymous01/22/05
GOOD STORY NOT ENOUGH SEX
GOOD STORY NOT ENOUGH SEX
by
Anonymous01/22/05
what else you got...
Oh come on!!! Yeah it wasn't bad but it looks like it's been written by a horny 14 year old. Where's the passion? The grunting, the intricate descriptions...
It sucks
by
Anonymous01/22/05
Cupid missed.
Ever hear the phrase of opportunity knocking? A lovely blonde goes after our hero? Adam and they enjoy a good bout of sex on Valentine's day, then he lets her go? It just seems so hollow. Take a chance, with a little tension and some creativity you could have made that something for real romance.
very original write,
often had those mental movies of the
laundry mats when my step father was alive
he had over 80 laundry mats and the stories
I could tell you
English
Public sex...
always makes me hot. Thanks for sharing this!
A Fun Story
May need another edit, but it was a fun little story. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple Foreskin
GOOD STORY NOT ENOUGH SEX
GOOD STORY NOT ENOUGH SEX
what else you got...
Oh come on!!! Yeah it wasn't bad but it looks like it's been written by a horny 14 year old. Where's the passion? The grunting, the intricate descriptions...
It sucks
Cupid missed.
Ever hear the phrase of opportunity knocking? A lovely blonde goes after our hero? Adam and they enjoy a good bout of sex on Valentine's day, then he lets her go? It just seems so hollow. Take a chance, with a little tension and some creativity you could have made that something for real romance.
serendipity
very original write,
often had those mental movies of the
laundry mats when my step father was alive
he had over 80 laundry mats and the stories
I could tell you
great story
good luck and happy lovers day
:)
A fun read, short and quick. Anyway I love quickies. Good luck!
my clothes are dirty
I would love to go to the laundry and read this story there. Good story!
Spin cycle!
Good story, and hot.
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