All Comments on 'Mind_Hack.exe Ch. 02'

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newfield1981newfield1981almost 6 years ago
Pass the popcorn

Reading this story is like watching a summer block buster movie. I'm loving it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Maybe a sentence or two from the point of view of the girls when Adam and Dan disconnect from them? Do they feel like they just had sex? Seeing their confusion would be amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Really enjoyable

Good fun will some impending threats to spice things up. They are going to have to get pretty creative to get out of this.

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Enjoying this Series

Are you working on the next chapter?

KriptoKriptoalmost 6 years agoAuthor

It's almost done. Sorry about the wait.

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