All Comments on 'The Cortex'

by bracemaiden

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Intriguing, but...

technically speaking, probably should be in non-consent. Still, I hope there's more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Intriguing and prmising...

but it should be at nonconsensual...

I would really love to read about further functions and perks of the cortex at bending Lindas will.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
should have kept going!

it was obvious where the story was going from the start but it felt like it just sort of abruptly stopped after all the build up. i think it would've really benefitted from being a bit longer

johsunjohsunabout 4 years ago

That is so evil, and imaginative. A continuation would be fantastic.

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