All Comments on 'I Hate Waiting'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
A Pearl of a Poem~

wow I loved this one, superb poetry,

and the ending was awesome ...

'not as much I love you coming'

this was a great poem tung~

an excellent write

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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Another poem inspired by the hate thread? I like your approach. :)

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Simplicity..

I liked the simplicity of the stanzas and rhetoric in this poem... the simple complexity of love and hate.. desire and need.. good work

du lac

flyguy69flyguy69about 19 years ago
Ha!

I laughed. I loved it. Fun poem, tung!

sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
Clever

I loved it. 5 1/2. Not a thing wrong with it.

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