All Comments on 'Black Wedding'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it

What a fucking brilliant story. The stupid sluts will do anything for his magnificent cock.

Let's have a sequel where the sisters are forced to have a 3sum with him while the husband watches.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
He Obviously Wants It This Way

What is this unbelievable bull-shit? He is ready to just about cry that his 'soon' to be wife was screwing a blackman. The key word here is SOON! If he doesn't like what she did, he should dump her at the altar and make sure that everyone knows why. This would also be a really good revenge. Who says revenge is best served cold?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

This is one of the best unfaithful bride stories I've read in a long time. Believable, right to the action, and a fantastic finish. I'd love to read a sequel.

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 12 years ago
Oh Please

How about something a little more believable. What guy would go through with that wedding? Some people obviously have extreme inferiority complexes to come up with BS like this. I bet you fantasize about being that black guy, right? Of course no one could write a story about black women falling all over themselves to be with a white guy because that would be racist. The real ending to this story continues when the parson, having already asked her, turns to the guy and asks him if he takes her to be his wife. His response "No, because I just watched her fuck that black dude over there a few minutes ago. She and her sister are his cum sluts." As he pulls up her dress he says "See, here are his leftovers running down her leg." Then he removes the engagement ring from her finger, turns around and walks away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
NICE STORY

THE LAST COMMENTS ARE STUPID THIS IS A STORY HOWEVER IT SOUNDS REALISTIC WHICH MAKES IT GREAT PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY

PTBzzzzPTBzzzzabout 12 years ago
Most of the erotic nature

of black on white sex is the color difference. Sexuality is mostly in your head. The images of any interracial sex, be it asian, black, white hispanic is mostly the excitement of doing the forbidden.

Turn off the lights, sneek someone into a room and it is all the same unless there is a clue such as kinky hair, accent or scent.

TheStorkTheStorkabout 12 years ago
nice story

Don't listen to the haters, that was well-written and hot. I'd love to hear more - maybe Jackson takes on all three girls while the husband's stuck watching. Or maybe he gives the bride and groom a wedding gift... the kind that gets delivered nine months later!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Why???

Why go through with the damn wedding?

Doesn't marriage mean anything no more?

NexttimeroundNexttimeroundabout 8 years ago
God

help us that people actually go for this...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The guy waiting at the alter

Is really the bride in this stroy

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dumb Ass

A nigga fucks your wife for a fantasy is fine, but marrying her is fucking stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Perfect Wedding

I married my wife because she was a whore for just about any black man that wanted to fuck her.On our wedding day she was with six black men before she walked down the aisle.When she kissed me she still had some of their cum in her mouth.Then later she had twenty black men waiting for her at our hotel room,where she made me watch them fuck my new bride in her wedding dress like a filthy ghetto street whore.I wouldn't have it any other way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
great story

hope you follow up

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No real men here

Another fantasy writer who thinks a guy wants to be with a shameless slut. No way he marries her. He has a chance to walk away before being a lifelong cuckold. Oh wait he’s supposed to enjoy it and crumble because of a black man is in the mix. BS

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
2 Stars

Another Cluck on the loose .. I would have taken a Video and made sure that Her whole family got to see it .I would have made sure that everyone at the Wedding saw that Video .Then I would have Kicked her to the Curb . She had been lying to Him with her BFF and Sister covering everything up . I forgot they were Screwing him Too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sony

Opowieść dość dobra - mieszkamy na zachodzie europy i moja żona w dniu naszego ślubu już była w czwartym miesiącu czarnej ciąży - uwielbiam ja za to - teraz jesteśmy 13 lat po ślubie i mamy gromadkę czarnych dzieciaków których ja jestem tylko tatusiem lecz ojcem jest bramkarz z pobliskiej dyskoteki - teraz rucha moja piękną żonę aby wyhodować ją szósty raz.Ja liżę jej cudownie zniszczoną cipkę z jego spermy i całuję łechtaczkę po każdym stosunku - uwielbiam patrzeć,jak kryje moją śliczną 27 letnią żonę swoim potężnym pięknym penisem [ 8,5 cala długi i 6 cali naokoło ] On ma teraz 46 lat ale energię młodego ogiera i oby jak najdłużej

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lucky girls!

I'd love to be black-owned and gladly be their babies mama.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well this story is a loser. Why bother writing if you don't proofread to see if it made any sense?

And the groom? Oh hell no, he ain't gonna marry that trash. Better yet to expose her right there at the alter (well expose all of those wastes).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

would love to see a version from Jackson's side.. how does he get both sisters and others. better yet a sister threesome with him would be best.

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