All Comments on 'In a New Neighborhood Pt. 02'

Amazing work! Please continue this soon!

or is it "worthless cheating whores get dick drunk by druggee wannabe thugs who they otherwise have no real relationships with"?

Young couple struggles in less than desirable neighborhood.

That was your comment.

Do I have a wrong story?

Only thing she is struggling is getting 12" down the throat.

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I loved this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope in the next chapter that Eric gets taken by Julius and after being reluctant he learns to love it and crave it. Would love it if he hid it from Karen but Jason makes sure she catches him in the act.

The potential for an epic story with the obvious main plot now

joined by the sub plot of Eric's desire to be on his knees worshiping a black cock

his clear deeply repressed needs in this direction excited by the Brad & Becca

characters / Eric needs to emulate them as Jason continues to cuckold him

in the most rank and painful manner Karen needs to see her white cocksucking

faggot husband's subordination to her new found black friends/lovers ...........Jason has already laid claim to her with the silver anklet and Eric's desires for black structure in his life i'm sure he and Mark Steph's erstwhile betrothed can in tandem serve the manifold needs of white servitude to the superior black man / so many ways this can play out, all up to the author .......does he want to carry all the plots out? / No ?'s asked is an above average writer and more than able to carry out the task ........pregnancies ...the multiple markings of Steph and Karen & possibly Mark & Eric as well ....tats, brandings nipple rings ball sack adornments and the inevitable and big fave of mine The Chasity Device ............i give this 10********** and a big O

NOQuestionsasked can write, not many errors and the flow is pretty good. If this story goes where Eric turns into a cuck or a black cock worshiper I am out of here. Just once I want to see the black drug seller get his ass kicked but not before Karen and Stephanie get turned into prostitutes and then get tossed into the street.

Your story is an age-old one on Literotica. That said you’re doing a great job with it. I’m curious about your storyline as you progress through the next chapter. I’m looking forward to reading more. Xoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

You made the cuckold, both of them if you include the other one, being excited when he watched gay sex and you have them subservient to the black males. You also consistently made the star husband (the cuckold) be AMOG-ed by the star seducer and his wife losing respect for him despite her claims to still love her husband. As respect comes before love, it's clear where the story leads.

Well, just now I saw the story tags. Why do they only show at the final page? With that in mind, I believe you've achieved your purpose, LOL! Well done, but I am not going to read any further.

How about this for a great twist.....Eric puts two 9mm slugs in Jason's head and then pisses on Karen!!!!!!!!!!

But come on with the racist stereotypical stories. There's always a poor white nieghborhood for them to go to in any city. Not every black man is a drug dealer with a big dick. White women don't turn mindless sluts for a big dick and just cheat on a man we love . Really? Have them selling drugs that will Apu for each houses and you think they are running it out of where they live and in and around the same building?? We know most of them are the laziest in bed and don't do shit. Unless it's porn or a fetish no black man is going to tell a woman to use the N word when referring to him or his cock. Dick does not stretch out pussy unless you are intentionall trying to stretch yourself and always keep something in it to keep it open. Maybe years and years of enojemos double and triple pentration might. One dick won't. Read about it. So much hotter if it were realistic and not the poor white couole taken advantage of and cucked by the bad black drug dealer neighbors. Who can't act decently

Love the story and the pacing, but I think a few things ruined it for me. During Karen and Jason’s first time, she was able to take the whole thing waaaay too fast, and she gave into the verbal vulgarities without any sort of resistance. I think she needs to be a LOT more reluctant and have a harder time taking the whole thing. That would make it way hotter and more real for me at least.

Don't make another one. Let Eric get pissed and flip his shit. Drop his unfaithful bitch and fuck up her and Jasons world.

This one lacked subtlety of the first one. Things were too direct. Also cuckold plot is unnecessary. The story could have been way better. Seduction plot seemed so forced. Also why nobody completely closes the door while having sex? So many ajar doors.

this shit was fire you got these haters typing angry in one hand other hand on there lil dicks lol..keep up the good work

Keep going have thoroughly enjoyed the detail and pace of all your stories so far.

Call me whatever you want but this started out great for me and ultimately pissed me off because it was so well-written and here's a backhanded compliment for you that it made me realize that the backstory is all part of it. And Rick apparently works his ass off I don't know what his wife does. So she finds it okay to go off on a weekend when he's got to stay back and work hard he knows something she doesn't know and when he tells her about it she thinks he's a racist and calls her out on it. And then what do we have she feels Justified cheating on her husband I'm all for openness but if you fuck around behind someone's back that's just wrong if they're into it fine if they're not into it then you're just doing the wrong thing. That's the way I am maybe that's the old school.

The bottom line is it's really well written and I don't take points away from the author for that but the plot line pissed me off I won't be reading any more it's aggravating me more than I care to admit good luck

Let him stand up for him self even if he gets a beating. Then dumps the wife as he has to

I hope Eric opens the door and sees Karen ... but Karen is too busy to have fun ... she thinks Steph is behind the door .... then Karen and Jason do not talk to each other for two days .... .. and Eric returns to work .... then only Karen can decide what to do with her life and how to end the holiday ...

Definitely deserves a part 3! Karen needs her nipples pierced too and there's plenty of conflict to further explore. Reminds me of my story "Interception" which I'm tweaking for a re-release soon. Keep writing!

Amazing work! Please continue this soon!

Karen needs her nipples pierced too and a tatoo. And hopefully Eric's desire to be on his knees worshiping Julius black Cock. Then we would have tree couples who are slaves to BBC

I can’t wait till chapter 3, very well written. A gradual descent of a prim and proper wife to worship black cock. She will be a submissive slut and her outfits would start to change like Steph. The anklet chain would be the start, then piercings, then a tramp stamp and eventually a ♠️ tattoo. Jason will get her hooked to the point he starts sharing her with his gang and his clients. 😊

There are hundreds like this one just less wordy. The only way this story can be salvaged is for the husband to stand up for himself.

It's hard to make the second chapter as hot as the first but you succeeded. Great read. 5 stars!

We want to congratulate you, for your excellent erotic stories of interracial sex.

Your stories are full of details, you get us to esteem the characters, and above all we appreciate the gradual conviction, of the white women, to have sex with black men!

Tell me from today as, Some more of your satisfied readers.

Federico of Mexico.

COMMENT.- We enjoy all your characters, but our favorites are the young couple, Becca and Brad, those little white boys, being perverted by multiple blacks, (If we want them to be turned among many blacks) is extremely morbid.

I wish you had written a sequel to your other story with the wife getting video-taped on Snapchat as this sequel did nothing for me. I dislike the "superior black man/inferior white man" theme, which made this story unenjoyable for me. Also, the reader must ask why any spouse would put up with a spouse who apparently contributes nothing to the marriage (other than good looks), while the other spouse busts his/her ass trying to make a better life for them? In this case, the husband would be better off being single and being treated with some respect than dealing with his jerk of a wife, and he would seem to be intelligent enough to realize it. I also found it ludicrous to believe that the wife would accept the story that the unemployed drug dealer earned enough money from a wrongful termination lawsuit to afford a beach house--no one is that stupid! For the husband to accept the invitation to go to the beach house with the thugs who clearly treat him with disrespect was also unbelievable. You write pretty well, and I eagerly awaited this story, but I am crestfallen that I waited for a disappointing sequel. If you do write a third part, I hope you will follow the suggestions that the husband either pack up, leave the cheating jerk, return to the apartment, pack up, and leave her to her own fate or resort to violence to get his revenge. I truly hope you do not have this husband becoming gay.

I would love to have Julius to tell Jason how he caught Eric drooling over the Blow job Brad gave him, the two come up with away to have Eric come over and succumb to his desires and suck Julius as Brad did. Jason gets much satisfaction telling Karen he was right about her wimp husband but first he also gets Eric to suck his bbc

Really enjoyed the story but after reading the part about Eric watching Brad suck bbc I am hoping part 3 has Eric give in to his dreams and suck Jason bbc and why not lick his ass also , make Eric a total bitch for bbc just like Jason predicted in part one

So well written. But it is like reading a slow motion car crash. You know it is going to end so badly. Their marriage is finished. You read about girls like this in real life, they never escape the life they are led into.

Dont bother. Like most stories in this section this is pretty cookie cutter. Wimp white husband, black "thug", naive white wife willing to give up love and marriage for some dick. There is no imagination in this section minus a few stories. Next chapter will have the husband become a willing cuck who cleans his wife after sex and probably suck the guys dick. Because thats what all the other stories here have written why should this one be any different.

To those hating on this well-written story, what were you hoping to read in a story from the "Interracial Love" section? Happy white couple - wife gets hit on by black guy - wife turns him down and everyone lives happily ever after? This is erotic fiction. And in a story labeled with the "cuckold" tag you pretty much have 2 choices: husband is or ends up a willing cuckold, or he is cuckolded without his knowledge and permission. There are plenty of both types in this section (and we're still not sure which one Eric will end up being). Go to back to the "Romance" section and stay there.

I’m a straight married white male with a hot wife but I gotta admit I’m hooked on this story , loving it and hoping Eric , the straight white guy sucks black cock because he wants too. Have I imagined? Put my self in this story as Eric? Yes I have 😫

Weak wimpy hubby with gay tendencies. Tick

insanely attractive white wife. Tick

black thug drug dealer. Tick

Hubby called away at just the right/wrong moment. Tick

wife raped but then starts to love it. Tick

Who owns dis pussy. Tick

wife goes alone to lovers bedroom to end it, but can't help but spread her legs. Tick

wife added to thugs stable of white street hoes. Oh no you fell at the last, maybe you'll do better next time

Your right of course. no imagination blah blah. Can't wait to see your interracial story here When will it come out, genius?

I’ve read both parts of this well written and hot story, I like many of the other readers want to see a part 3. I’ve read all the comments and many readers(including myself) are looking forward to Eric giving in to the lust he has been dealing with since watching Brad, sucking on his drug dealer Julius’ bbc. Many comments want this as I do but the one comment that caught my eye was from you Hooked💪🏿👏👍 I commend you in your admission to imagining (wishing) you could be in the story Eric. You also write how you want Eric to suck black cock because he wants too. After adding it all up,Hooked, I have a ? Have you shared this fantasy of yours with your wife? Maybe you should? Maybe she’ll surprise you and you can both get on your knees for bbc.? No judgment , I feel you, hope your dreams come true😘

I'm not a wtiter, never claimed to be, most critics aren't. But that doesnt mean my comments arent valid because Im not. Does that mean that people who like the story also dont have a valid opinion because they dont write? I didn't think so.

I like to read, I've read thousands of stories on this website. To say this story isnt cookie cutter is pure ignorance. Just go read the others. Me wanting a different story than one that I have read hundreds of times over shouldn't be as big of an issue as it is. I'm far from the only one making the complaint either. So stop acting like my comments arent valid.

I love the story! Shout out to the author! One thing one request? Let’s fuck Eric up good, lol. I wanna see our white boy suck bbc and take it in the ass, doesn’t matter which or all of the bbc boys can take a turn but fuck the (straight ) guy crooked

Eric watches Brad suck on bbc and is rock hard! Goes home and jerks off thinking about it, can’t satisfy his wife, let’s Jason grab his wife’s ass more than once! I’d be really disappointed now if Eric doesn’t suck on Julio’s and or Jason cocks, take it in the ass also, please hurry with part 3

Just read both parts of your story and I found it hot and I found it more realistic than most of the stories I’ve read. The idea of Julius making Eric his white cock sucking bitch is killing me to wait for.🤑the guy was in prison so maybe he can telling stories of getting his ass licked and have Eric burying his face sticking his tongue way up in there.🙀I don’t leave comments but I couldn’t resist after this story, hope not to wait long please? For part 3

The idea of Julius getting Eric all coked up, on his knees sucking his dick could only be better if Jason sets the whole think up so Karen can be there watching. I will wait for part 3 I know the author has something In mind for Eric that involves eating from Julius cock, hope I don’t have to wait long

Really like both parts of the story, far more realistic than most, nothing over the top or too hard to believe. I’d be interested in seeing Karen find out Jason is still fucking Becca and and have the two girls become competitive over Jason’s prized black cock. I think the author has made us wait as he’s moved along at a fast but not to fast of a pace. Eric returning home and uncontrollably jerking off to the images of Julius dominating a teenage white boy has to be smoking hot to all the readers whether gay straight male or female, cmon part 3

19 year old blonde hair all American boy Brad , scoring the coke from the black ex prison mate, Brad sucking his cock😆

Jason goes against Karen’s plea and fucks her with out mercy in her ass, this leads her to believe as she can barely walk, to go back to Eric, she walks in on Eric,who shockingly to her eyes, is having his ass fucked with out mercy by Julius, the two can then stumble into their arms and ponder on which one of their asses took the most punishment

Eric wants to suck black dick just doesn’t know it yet but when he gets the chance when Julius gives him the chance gives him the black cock his true wants will cum, cum right in his white boy mouth that is

Please update ASAP love this story

Excellent. You look like you are hitting your stride with this latest (last?) chapter. Good luck on more of this or a new story. Good luck!

Did Brad get a discount off his sale for sucking

His dealers cock? No he had to pay more for the right to suck the beautiful dick. Love the story can’t wait for part 3

Hope you keep writing. A great story so far.

Please!

Excellent writer

Continue this great story (saga)

Well, I can not sleep of curiosity.

Of how many more humiliations will you do to these 3 white women.

But above all I want to read.

As they are subjected to the black dicks, to those two white men, (Eric and Brad)

Courage and greetings.

Federico of Mexico.

Eric devastated after seeing Karen in bed with Jason, turns to drugs to feel better, drug king pin Julius takes full advantage, Eric gives in to his want for Julius cock, he’s wanted it since he saw Brad sucking on it, he his owned by the former prisoner, Eric doesn’t say no to all of Julius commands of ass eating cocksucking cumguzzling and assfucking, now he feels better

More please

Looking forward to part 3, 5 stars from me

I wanna see Jason fuck Karen in her ass. Make her walk crooked for a week

Not Done, Done Are You?

ca'mon, ca' mon, Brakes over, been awhile since you last posted, NEXT Chapter is now overdue! *LOL*

You're not Done, Done are you?

Great story line, can't wait to see if Karen ends up with piercings and tatts that Jason wants her to get. Hopefully Karen sees Eric submitting to big black cock!

I agree with blksnaketaster. I really wanna see Karen catch Eric in the act of submitting to black cock, it’s easy to see he wants it

Cookie cutter unrealistic. Boring! The writer will probably cave to the other idiots

and make the husband gay.

Can’t wait for pt. 03!!!!!

Really good story. But seriously needs a part 3. Too many loose ends that need to be answered.

what eric should do is leave his skank wife, throw her out of their apartment.

she will be dumped when next dumb white girl comes along or Jason ends up in prison

Hope to see Becca in action again. She must be inseminated right before her faggot bf.

Eric, on the other hand, is kinda cool. I wish he could reconcile with his wife's imminent interracial pregnancy.

An excellent story. Most of interracial cuckold stories are worthless shit. Only you and thecryptkeeper can write decent stories about IR cuckolding.

Please keep writing, we're waiting for the next chapter)

So when is the next chapter coming?

So many comments. I noticed some cookie cutter comments - wrong, your story stands alone, very real world possibilities, erotic, stimulating, sexciting, exciting and sexually stimulating!

Does he have bi-sexual urges to be a bitch for Julius....maybe but - maybe just enough straight to not go there, close but no....maybe.

You perfectly storied the girls into IR and ultimately they both fell in love (lust) and wanted to be owned. Karen couldn't get enough and seemingly stayed in the rental screwing for all but maybe a few hours to shop and sun tan....she was totally in a euphoric state of arousal and wanting to fuck and....AND - 'Make LOVE"

So what happens now? You let all of us imagine and mentally write our own ending....that's good AUTHORING; however, a little between the lines awareness for thought.

Eric stands in the door destroyed. He has always lover her - aroused,, devastated and...Aroused - BUT, he realized he has known from day one that his wife was in a dangers way and while he tried to deal with it, he voiced it all in a manner that was argumentative and not meaningful with concern for Karen. He overlooked past dalliance, overt hustles and demeaning sexual advances and now he knows he handled it all wrong so...

Couple thoughts.

1) he immediately leaves for home where he sits in anguish until Karen comes home ?( same night or a few days?) and they talk. She assures him that she really does and always will love him. Yes, it happened in weakness, Yes she loved it and wanted all she could get BUT - she could, would and wants to put it in the past as an experience never to happen again.

2) Karen is devastated but wants to have Eric allow her to continue as an occasional, sexual fling until she gets it out of her system and promises that she never wants to lose Eric and she will be discreet.

3) Eric moves before Karen gets back, has her served and Jason assures Karen of his love and that he will never leave or hurt her. Will she end up whoring? Will she really become Mrs Jason? What will she do when he goes to Jail or is killed.

Your story was very plausible, realistic in every sense...Thank You!

2nd Thoughts

Boring and predictable cuck story. Let me guess Eric walks in and starts jacking off his little penis. This category has gone to shit.

Love that stories well writen and the build up is so good please do a part 3

After the blowup between Eric and Karen, Eric leaves with his baggage. Jason decides that Karen still has a strong tinge of conservatism in her bones and needs to be disciplined in order to face the new realities staring her in the face. He discusses this with Steph and she agrees. Jason's strong hands on Karen manhandle her to lie on his legs stomach wise and Steph pulls down panties and shorts thus baring her Lily white ass open. Jason rains many blows of his right hand hard on the reddening ass while Karen bleats out tearful apologies. The brutal spanking continues as he ignores Steph's advice to stop. Finally, he relents and dumps Karen on the ground s sobbing mess. Jason directs Karen to strip down by discarding sleeveless blouse and bra which earns her a spanking as her nose is pressed against the corner of room. Karen is told to stand up straight with hands on top of head facing the room corner. Steph finds a flyswatter and uses this to spank Karen for letting her arms sag downward and tap underneath the fleshy arms to make her keep them straight higher on top of head.

The two enjoy a sumptuous pasta meal prepared by Steph as Karen's belly growls from the delicious smell while standing at attention facing the room corner. Steph removed the engagement ring from the humiliated woman and gives her a love tap underneath the arms. Finally, Karen is called to kneel with arms on head in front of Jason while making tearfully created apologies to him and Steph who agrees to be her Mistress and disciplinarian. Karen goes to work giving Jason the most equsite blow job under Steph's supervision before bring allowed to ride Jason's cock out to the sunset. Steph directs a hungry Karen to crawl on knees to kitchen and kneel with hands on head watching the boiling pot containing an egg for her dinner instead of leftover pasta so craved. Her mistress feeds her pieces of the boiled eggs with her on knees with hands on top of head and belly still growling for substantial food.

Karen's days consist with pleasing Jason, cleaning house, washing their clothes, accepting Steph's plans for her to integrate with black men and women to please or to apologize for racism with punishment applied on ass and face. And to erase all traces of conservatism while bearing black babies from Jason and unknown fathers.

It's not like you own anybody anything. But it's a long time waiting and I am going impatient for the next part.

The part where Jason just grabs her ass! Amazing primal tension. I have read this many times and I can’t wait for more from you

Who

Leaves a story like you did and doesn’t finish? I guess you do

You wanna know how to really get things left incomplete?

Comments like this.

Author might be busy, personal stuff happen, writers block, etc.

Sometimes, these things result in huge gaps.

where is part 3

Une suite vite

This is easily one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I hope you keep writing.

Can’t wait for part 3

Story has gone well till now but delay is really leaving me blue balled. Please consider this request and post next part.

Part three PLEEEEEEEEEEEEaaaaaaaaassseee

Man you have got our hopes up. Please don't leave us hanging.

Good story. please part 3

Please pretty please with sugar on it hon, my boyfriend and I are dying to read another chapter in this amazingly sexy and hot story! He wants me to get Blacked as it’s his biggest fantasy and I must say after reading so many stories thus far about white girls going black and how fabulous it is, I’m now seriously considering it. Stories as involved as yours really help to motivate me, so, please continue this adventure, and perhaps you’ll help push me over the edge to go out and finally create one of my own for my boyfriend. Pretty please, we must have more!! Thanks, Paige

I wanna see Eric suck some black dick, doesn’t matter who , he jerked off over Julius cock and he thinks about Shawn’s cock also, he can’t satisfy Karen cause he’s got black cock on his brain, hope he sucks all three of the guys, they deserve it and so does he and let Karen watch lol

You lead with lots of good spin offs, Eric can have his Black Cock just like Karen and Sheph. Both girls seem at the right age for starting families as well.

Amazing story, please write the third part. Karen can get pregnant and Eric would be able only spy on them.

I love it we got the hot white wife Karen the hot fiancé Steph the young chick Becca her boyfriend the all American boy Brad and the husband Eric, what do they all have in common? They are all white and they all wanna get on their knees for the black dick . Sounds right

The door opens and Eric wants revenge when he sees Karen in bed with a Jason but Jason over powers him and tells Karen to get ready and watch your fag husband suck my dick, and he does

Great so far. Hope there will be a third chapter.

I really really hope so

I see this story is a year old and author never finished, why would you leave it like that and stop? Not sad it wasn’t a great story any way to wordy and long but for all the positive comments for the author to ignore is truly ignorant on his part, honestly sorry I wasted my time on an author who doesn’t care about his readers

So many possible directions this story can go! It's hot so far... Please write more.

Such great writing skills. You have a talent sir

Thank you for this excellent erotic story. I thought that you should have spent a little more time establishing the friendship between Jason and Karen but even with that the story flows well and I appreciate the longer chapters. What now? Can't see a happy ending with what has gone before but please be realistic. Thanks again.

Why hasn’t this ever been finished? Sure, I could see you feeling satisfied with this ending, but not a whisper of a story from you in a year? What, did your girlfriend give in and you were destroyed by the results?

Is there any more to this story coming? I hope so, because it’s great.

Love this story...please continue it!

This really isn't going to get a finishing chapter or anything?

Karen is so hot she couldn't stop herself. Eric is shocked, but his cock thinks otherwise.

They come to agreement that Eric loves Karen but Karen needs sex with Jason.

With time they get used to Karen spending more time with Jason where Eric is busy working. Karen starts to spend nights at Jason's place.

She starts to have sex with his friends, get a slut tattoo and start working for Jason at the club.

Jason is arrested for drug crimes.

Eric and Karen move out. But Karen is addicted to sex and finds ways to bang with help from Eric

Your thoughts mirror mine on how I would like to see this story go. Sadly, after all this time I'll be surprised if it continues.

Please continue your story.

A really reluctant wife that is seduced by alfa male, step by step her moral walls are demolished, I hope you can follow and write of this kind of stories.

Eric watches and knew Karen no longer needs him Steph has Shawn he watches helpless as Karen tells Jason she belongs to him now, As Eric listens he hears Jason say that Julius wants Eric and he is going to turn him into is cock worshipping fuck toy the same as Karen and s Steph are for Jason and Shawn.Great story build up to and the collapse of Karen's defences was very erotic reading.

The beginning is good with the 2 points of view.

You lost me when the husband is ok to let his wife go to the beach with two dangerous (and armed) drug dealers.

It would have been so much better if Steph was working with the 2 guys to seduce Karen: showing her friend what she could do with 2 BBC.

I agree their is nothing I’d like more than for Julius to make Eric his cock sucking worshiping bitch but due to this author who left the story at a point where it needs to be finish we will never see it. The author lacks the fortitude the talent and most of all the respect owed to all the readers, I only wish some other author could pick the story up, soo very disappointed in the author who deserves only contempt for what he did