wow that was amazing... this is fantastic, i hope that there are more coming of this genre...
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Anonymous01/27/05
Very Impressive
and very talented.
The whole package - very entertaining - looks like you could have another path to walk. Perhaps a story teller of substance growing to promise. Nice work - real nice!!!
You are appreciated for your time, efforts and talent - More please
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Anonymous01/27/05
An amazing story
I found the story very fascinating and very believable; I have seen a number of craft which are not of this world. At one time scientists here were given something that was a small metallic object which had the capability to power a large city and after exhaustive attempts to penetrate its structure were able to finally render it inoperable. After doing so they agreed and concluded that since it no longer funtioned that it never could have functioned for the purpose that it was designed. How's that for pure illogic?
When i first began reading this story, i was not sure what to expect. I didn't expect for it to turn me on as much as it did. I loved every detail of it. I loved how you focused on the woman's pleasure and how it continued until she couldn't take anymore. Amamzing.
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Anonymous08/28/08
Yuuuuummy!!!!
Wow.
I cummed like, eight times.
Wow I am really jelous!
Keep on writing, you rock.
VERY nice! It is difficult to write a non-human story, or any erotic story, for that matter, without having any direct contact at all, and I think you did very well at it!
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Anonymous07/23/10
Wonderful
A lovely story, so well written and flowed beautifully. I look for ward to reading your other work. Also she could go on couldn't she, with her gift, just a thought :)
English
awesome
wow that was amazing... this is fantastic, i hope that there are more coming of this genre...
Very Impressive
and very talented.
The whole package - very entertaining - looks like you could have another path to walk. Perhaps a story teller of substance growing to promise. Nice work - real nice!!!
You are appreciated for your time, efforts and talent - More please
An amazing story
I found the story very fascinating and very believable; I have seen a number of craft which are not of this world. At one time scientists here were given something that was a small metallic object which had the capability to power a large city and after exhaustive attempts to penetrate its structure were able to finally render it inoperable. After doing so they agreed and concluded that since it no longer funtioned that it never could have functioned for the purpose that it was designed. How's that for pure illogic?
WOW!
Fab story – I can't tell you how much I enjoyed my self reading this. Actually felt a bit J of the lucky, lucky girl. More please.
wow
It was great it made me cum mmmmm.
Very hot
When i first began reading this story, i was not sure what to expect. I didn't expect for it to turn me on as much as it did. I loved every detail of it. I loved how you focused on the woman's pleasure and how it continued until she couldn't take anymore. Amamzing.
Yuuuuummy!!!!
Wow.
I cummed like, eight times.
Wow I am really jelous!
Keep on writing, you rock.
Great!
One of the best stories that I have read. What a great turn on!
ooh
VERY nice! It is difficult to write a non-human story, or any erotic story, for that matter, without having any direct contact at all, and I think you did very well at it!
Wonderful
A lovely story, so well written and flowed beautifully. I look for ward to reading your other work. Also she could go on couldn't she, with her gift, just a thought :)
Thank you again
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