Spent

A time well 'spent'

such a tease, thanx xxx

omg! omg!

i came hard the first time i read this sticking my fingers in myself like a mad woman, then on shakey legs i got my toys and read it again and played along, pretending i was allison! i've never cum so hard in my life. thank you so much Sir, this is the hottest sttory i've ever read ever ever ever!

angie in uk

wow.

you're incredible.

Liked it!

I'm not a big fan of BDSM, but this one made me hot!

WOW

This is a story I have been looking for...made me soooo hot and wet just reading the words and visualizing the scenario....Where can I meet a man like this??? Great story!!!!!

very arousing

very very exciting work of art! Sir Nathan has a way with words! When is the next story?

Would love You as my Master

To Sir with love. Thank you.

If I ever get a master, Sir Nathan, you've just put yourself up for the standard of whom to compare them to.

breathless

oh my god.

all i can say, is oh my god.

~*~

amazing

SN - as always i am squirmy and wet after reading your story ... a delicious treat!

Green

SO Erotic

I absolutely loved this story.. got me so hot!It's a change to see one about a more caring, "gentle" master.. Excellent work!

omg omg omg

you made me so wet and hot! time to go play....

AWESOME

Sir Nathan, this was a very HOT and WET story. I dream of a Master like this, I think I might have one in the making. *grins** He will have to read this story. I know He will love it!!
You are so vivid in your writing, I can see and feel everything you did to Ally....**smiles**

Thought-Provoking

Superb. My girlfriend is quite submissive, so I think I'll try some of these ideas on her...

What a Thrill

thank You for the wonderful story. it was a very "pleasurable" read for me. i wish i could find a Master like this. ~blessed be

Thank You, Sir

Ohhhhhhh,Mmmmmmmm! Thank You so much, Sir. I will dream of my Master allowing me to play like You allowed Ally. I dare not ask Him for such a generous and luscious reward until I have pleased Him with this story and given him my total devotion. Your story provides me with even more inspiration to serve my Master well.

Delicious...

Mmmmm... that was amazing. Adding it to my favorites and forwarding it on.

I cammmeeeeee!!!

God Sir Nathan! I feel this surpasses so many of your other stories I have read so far! Thank you for such a luscious profound orgasm! Yes I cameeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

OMGGG!!! Fantastic Story!!!!!

OMG!!! OMG!!!! Sweet Jesus this is arguably one of the BEST stories i ever read on this site! Sir Nathan! What a fabulous writer, and what a master you are! For to be able to write like this, You must be a MASTER! I totally and absolutely LOVED this story, it aroused me so much I had to push fingers to pussy and cammmmme! I LOVE how the caring, gentle, oh so knowlegable Master knew his sub so well and gave her all she needed to be so much her true-self with him! GREAT work! Are you looking for a girl like me?

Wow

You Sir, are an artist

:)

I look foreward to reading more of your stories in the future - I am quite enraptured by them. :)

One of the most understanding and amazing authors on here

If I can find a man who is this understandings and masterful I will be content. Your men are so strong but they are interesting and successful. It seems as the woman's aim is a willing submission unlike it being forced

Wet...

Another fantastic read. You always please with words SN... Perhaps something to put my body at ease now. Fantastic.

-a

Yummm!

So delicious...I was left horny and hungry for more. So pleased by you again.

WOW

Your stories were one of the first I read when coming to Literotica. So glad I decided to revisit your page and read something I hadn't yet. Definitely will have to work harder to get through all of your stuff. Awesome good read.

Different perspective

But i LOVE it. Usually the Dom does the things but in this story, the Sub does it instead. It was really enjoyable reading the Sub tease herself. Great story!

Damm im so wet from reading that