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ok good writing but
she was sick ...ew im sorry flu sex ew if they were both sick ok maybe but she was coughing up a lung...come on lol couldnt they have waited till she got better... the only reason why im not giving u a 100
nice
just loved it
A different kind of medicine.
A very creative way of curing the common cold indeed. The story was engaging enough, and Mark's gestures were thoughtful ones, although I would have liked to see a more prolonged courtship and for Lisa to be recovered before the actual intimacy took place.
soup & more...
I liked it! It takes a good man to make a girl feel that wanted while she's sick :)
Romance at its finest
Any romantic story beginning with "coughed up a lung" is worth a 5 in my book, any day any time!
Good work!
Now that's a house call
A different sort of romance. But I can't help but wonder if that sort of treatment is covered by her HMO? :)
Rumple
can i have some of that chicken soup
that was so cool. I can only imagine how miserable she must have felt, but to have him come to her and with so much to offer. I don't mean the teddy bear or rose either. Good story, nice sex.
More!
This is a great story, and I liked that you tweaked and twisted it a tiny bit. Your writing style is unique and I like it! Please write more (and preferably not lesbian, but its your choice!)!
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