All Comments on 'Another Man's Treasure'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice

Ooo Black pussy food of the gods. Its been so long, great story thanks

spredmspredmabout 6 years ago
Good

Loved the story

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 6 years ago
nice

nice story! just too short..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Get an editor or learn to proofread

"Is it because im fat?" should be I'm. Failed to capitalize or put in the apostrophe. You referred to 'breast' does she only have one? "Sorry Kristy you probably think im a prev-"" Again I'm(SIC) and I can't even guess what the cut-off word is. Previous, prevail, prevalent?? Surely you didn't mean pervert?

bee49bee49about 6 years agoAuthor
Stay pressed grammar nazi

The thought that someone is annoyed by some errors on this site is pretty funny. Stay pressed.

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
My only complaint

Is it was short. it was a great premise, white stepson banging his black stepmom.

mspervy46mspervy46about 6 years ago
Excellent

Amazing, I hope she divorces the bum and marries Jake. They would make a good couple. Erase the grammar patrol, & any anonymous trolls. Complaining about grammar on a porn site is just stupid! Last thing you're thinking before you cum!

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Like the story a lot. AAAA++++

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I've published on here a few times under a couple of different usernames before deleting my account but im back for good this time. So for all of you who were waiting for me to finish 'Man of the Mountain'. Your wait will be over soon. Probably won't finish 'Samantha'.

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