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I loved this part:
"...no tribute more glorious than your desire
no line of poetry could compare to your fire
to the lust you arouse
to the love you inspire..."
:)
Stunning work
I liked this so much, the images it develops in the mind. an A+ piece of work
Lovely, moonlight!
This is another poem I would like to hear read aloud because there is such an appealing cadence to the words. You made me remember very sweet things. Thank you. :)
Very nice!
Lyrical and spicy sweet. ~Imp
You awakened me, the dog !
Very nice. Loved it. And you got this dog wagging his tail.
:)
Snoopy, woof
wow
extremely passionate....
very moving, and subtle erotic poem.
please make more!
Xcellent !
yumm ... nicely done, great imagery
So sweet
Loved your words here ~ it brought to my heart a joy..it's really sweet..
Beautifully written
To be awakened... sigh. ~Minx
Lovely!
Very well written. I enjoyed it immensely, the images it provokes, and makes me think of my Love, as well. I'll have to read the others!
Can I borrow your muse?
....'cause you write beautiful poetry. This is tender, full of passion...well done, Moonie.
~Tink.
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