All Comments on 'Mom's Surprise Birthday Party Ch. 02'

by johnjinglez1

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So funny!

Hilarious!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

First chapter was a lot better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Dad didn't see his car?

I guess the son's car was invisible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Blah blabla blah..

What a shit!

- The first part, looked promising, but.. In the second part, the perverted instincts of the author disgusted this story completely.

The fantasy and theory of these perverted kid-Utheoreticians, leads only to disgust and farcicals.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Good BUT

I have to say I liked part one better. I never understood a son just taking his mom, I would like there would be some tenderness and caring.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Get rid of dad

In the first chapter there is no mention of a dad/husband. Not even during the discussion of birthday plans. I was under the impression that the mom was single. I like that scenario better.

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien420over 1 year ago

Keep up the good work. It’s fictional people. It’s not a dick don’t take it so hard.

Lee2012Lee2012over 1 year ago

Hot Columbian!!! Had s couple of outings with one scorching Latin lady. Nothing more than “dinner-n-movie”, alas she’s still simmering I’m sure.

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