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Carpet of Roses

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by Quillman01/25/05

Nicely written

A delicious blend of romance and erotica. Thank you and well done.

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by Anonymous01/25/05

Where was he?

First you have her living in LA and Billy living it up in Chicago but later in the story she asks him about him living the life in LA.
Can't say I loved the story, but I did like it.

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by Bridget6901/25/05

Nice.

Definitely a great way to make up. Also loved the detail about the rose petals on the bed.

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