by Tales_From_Farborough
Thanks, I enjoyed this story. It had a fresh take on a classic situation and flowed nicely. Good job
i saw your comment in the Feedback Portal and the idea of a fresh take in any story here is worth exploring. It's not easy to produce something creatively different with erotic stories.
Anr thanks too T_F_F. Dorado was right. This was creatively different and well-written as well. I liked the slow progression and the wonderful self-delusion (really?) Maria The Innocent displays all the way through.
Lue
Ps: T_F_F, your biog notes are sadly uninformative. I (for one) like to know something about interesting new authors on Literotica and what influences they have on their stories. Might it be possible to add a couple of points?
Thanks for the kind words- now that I have a story published I'll flesh out my user page :) x
Usually peak at the last few paragraphs to determine if the story was worth reading. I was disappointed at first. But I decided to read the whole story, and I came to love the more subtle, psychological and very hot revenge to the story. 5/5 stars.