All Comments on 'A Dirty TASK Needs Doing Pt. 06'

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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
And that's a wrap!

Kimmy and crew WILL return in "You Only Cum Once", later this year! Or the next! Or whenever it is I decide to write more of these.

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Thanks for Reading!

EmirusEmirusabout 6 years ago
Moonraker in a parallel universe. 😳

It’s transsexual Jim but not as we know it. 🙄 Certainly not what I, and I suspect many others, thought we were going to get when looking at the category. 🤔 But there isn’t a category for product of a depraved imagination!! 😂 Absolutely barmy. 🤓 You certainly have a way with words and this last instalment was a rollercoaster at breakneck speed. Hilarious from the first chapter to the last. 😊

I loved it. It may have been in T&C but it really was in a category of its own. 👍

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
Aww, thanks!

To be honest, I think I could have put it into SF&F...buuuuuuut it was prominently about dick-girls.

So, transexual it was!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fucking awesome. Thank you so much

Oh please.

Can I have some more.

That was brilliant.

Floydman1Floydman1almost 6 years ago
Holy Hell...that was fantastic!

No joke. Hands down one of the best stories on here, full stop. I loved the plot, I loved the narrative tone, I loved the premise, I loved the sex scenes. And putting that last is deliberate. Yeah, there's lots of hot sex involving girls who have big cocks. That's what drew me to the story, sure, but it was actually the plot that kept me reading.

Do you have any idea how rare that is!? Especially for me! Usually it's like a Family Guy episode: the plot is just a vehicle for the jokes (sex in this case). But this was a fun action story with lots of humor and fun sex involving women who packed serious heat.

My highest praise is that I'm typing this all out on a phone...I never see stories that make me want to write reviews on a small touchscreen, never mind paragraph-long essays. Well done! And I can't wait to read more about Kimmy and her further exploits!

Seriously, I want more. I commend you for your writing and how much effort must have gone into creating this work.

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Aww, thanks! ^_^

*blushes!*

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaabout 4 years ago
sequel?

Please please please please please please please please please write a sequel. This series is too good to leave us of a cliffhanger like that. Besides, you already it open for one. I even managed to find my account details so this wouldn't be anonymous

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Agreed, a sequel is needed :)

This is such a great story! I keep coming back to it and would really like a sequel, or any other works about dickgirls. You're a really good writer!

Kpick96205Kpick96205almost 4 years ago
Great Work

I loved the story. You did a great job by developing your story board and following it. Also the introduction and integration of new characters was great. You have great skills and I hope you continue to keep writing and contributing to Literotica. Again great work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

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