All Comments on 'Dickish Direction: Male'

Quit writing. You suck at it.

rood

Nice job

This is a fabulous bit of storytelling. The multiple perspectives really flesh out the piece. I love your detail and the slow confusion and grudging awareness of the transformations. Physiological, mental and emotions changes occurring simultaneously deserve this rich and plush detail.

Obviously, this is not for those who enjoy one page predictably monotonous tales.

If you have an imagination that can be sparked by a different reality, this story is for you!

Love this story, I keep it bookmarked to come back to. The amount of detail is wonderful, and the description of the transformation is incredibly sexy.

I can't help but wish there was more.