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Well Written and not a dumb husband in sight
Better Author - well done
I love this!
A real unique little story :)
That was a lot of fun.
It sure would be nice if it were so. A very imaginative, fun read. Good luck in the contest.
Inventive and Fun!
Made me smile! Thanks!
LOL
Nice to read something clever and lighthearted with a beautiful message, makes you wish it could really happen.
Big Smile
Dream you're a darlin'. I enjoyed this thoroughly.
Sorry ...
I missed this one. Very imaginative but of course I expect nothing less from you. Good luck!
Very original!
I got a big kick out of this. Great concept, and funny too.
It worked on several different levels.
Good for a quickie, but needs a long haul
It had an interesting premise and for that reason alone deserves respect. It's just it's really begging for more expansion, more reality, more pain. A deeper look at the world, more pathos, more reason to hold the characters, something. It's a premise that deserves a longer story whebever you eventually come back to it.
Still, quite enjoyable.
Never mind the punctuation!
Valentine's pleeease. Loved it, a touch of MASH and a heap of laughs - great stuff DP. My only regret is we didn't get love potion nummer 9, or have I been hanging round those old record shops too long.
Nicely done.
Inventive
Extraordinarly inventive - you deserve a prize for that alone.
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