All Comments on 'Love, Cherish, Obey'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Like the start of story hope you have him explain to her more why he ignore her for a year seem like because doesn't care for her and just wants to discipline her hope that made sense do love start of story so hope update soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I want more...

I absolutely loved loved loved this story, I really hope that you will decide to write more about Adas and Charles story, I’m really looking forward to it.

HobomonarchyHobomonarchyalmost 6 years ago
Good but felt devoid of

Love. Like he only has lust for her and nothing else. You didn't show any aftercare if there even was any, did he just spank her until she collapsed and then left?

honeybreehoneybreealmost 6 years ago
Update please...5 stars!

Great start so far but I agree that there needs to be more background on Charles and his perspective on the start of their marriage. I get that he was afraid of his baser instincts of D/s with his wife but if he is a Dom why did Ada need to come to him for comfort and passion if he was basically ignoring her for a year? But when divorce is brought up he has no problem showing he is an alpha, seems to me he needs the spanking..lol. But great start I can’t wait to see what you have in store for these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
mmh... not complete

Something is missing - aside from the obvious, ie plot continuation in more chapters. While the author chose to add a lot of introspection, there is really little insight into what drives Ada and Chris

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Please

Please continue.

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