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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tale01/29/05

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Your Poem was mentioned on the thread
'New Poems Reviews'

thanks for the journey~

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Nice piece but the font and color choices are appalling.

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Nice piece but the font and color choices are appalling.

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by Amyfriend02/09/07

Powerful message..

that would have been better if it was easier to read.

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by tazz31707/28/12

FOR ALL WHO HAVE EMOTIONS

to cloud ones minds with ego ideas, TK U MLJ LV NV

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