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by My Erotic Tale02/02/05

Excellent

I liked the addition on the end
to focus the ...thought!
nice touch, and a nice flare
with colored poetry, almost
living words

I had a thought before
I thought about it being a thought

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by duddle14612/30/06

Words

A recognition of the power of the mind to form words that gets transmitted from the brain to the fingers. The same path words have taken since time immemorial Beautiful illustration.

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by LeBroz02/08/07

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And a fount of truth, beauty, and love...

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by Amyfriend02/09/07

Nice poem..

Very inspiring and gives food for thought.

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by tazz31703/21/12

EVOLVING FROM THE SOUL

they enter unspoken. TK U MLJ LV NV

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